Good Stuff kid...
This is a pretty good "Serious Short", I like the concept and the art was good but you could have added a bit more animation, it seems like you are new to the game of animating so I can let it slide I guess....lol but overall man great work keep the material coming but bring a lil' more quality..
I'm not too new to animating, like i've said before, it was a choice to go with the style that I did, not all like the choice, but many do, it was a selection, I could have gone into full detail with my animation. I will be doing another animation similar to this, but a different theme, I'm actually storyboarding right now...
Thanks for the review and vote.
Speechless....
Excellent Animation, And story to go along with it, Makes a Epid Piece for me. Thanks for sharing your animation. You have done a great job keep up the good work.
Thank you kind sir! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you for the review and vote!
well, hmm lol its good
I feel you used your style quite well and you got the message across quite well. Reminds me of the composer. Wudda gave you a 10 is there were improved visuals though that IS the style you are using. Still a bit deeper depth background would be nice. Im just jealous lol Ive worked long whiles on like frame for frame flashes and you whip this together and its like 2 symbols per scene and...... bah lol. Still very good.
Also, props forn ot forgeting where you came from and responding to all reviews. If I ever get to go big on here I want to do the same. Have a good one man, peace.
haha, yeah, I promised i would respond to all reviews! thanks for the review man, I guess the concept is what brought people to like this flash so much, I guess if I spend more time comming up with an idea, and then make the animation, it turns out great... interesting...
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Well..
Great storyline, great music, not so great animation. As said a bit slow paced..Work on the animation quality and I'm sure you can do an allround winner! Good luck and keep em coming!
Thanks, my primary focus was on the storyline. Thanks for the review.
Hmm...
This flash was... decent. Somethings did purperb me however from giving you a ten. First, you could have put a lot more effort into the frame-by-frame effect. 2 frames a good effect does not make. Furthermore, the walking sequence in the beginning could have been a lot better. Altogether however, you get an 8 because the concept was moving, and I enjoyed watching the cartoon.
Yeah, the animation wasn't the best, but thanks for the review!