good....
....but could be better
good....
....but could be better
cool
it was pretty good, the story made sense and the music fitted well, like the others i think the animation needed a little attention, keep the style the same, just make scenes and movement a little more solid. 7/10, 3/5
Thanks for the review and the vote... I will keep these noted for my next flash.
iuno
animation wise, could have been way better, but i guess you were going for an artistic view through meaning of the flash, but portrayal does count, for two days work its pretty satisfactory, what threw me off was the facial expressions of the main character, but otherwise, ok flash, just animation wise not my kind of thing
Well I hope you enjoyed it otherwise! Thanks for the review!
Deep? How?
I think it's good to pull back and look at the big picture every now and then, and in a way, you manage that. So many toons are about tiny little vignettes. So kudos for trying something different. But this film is pretty much about an average middle-class life. It seemed neither depressing nor cynical to me, but just what it was. I enjoyed it. I liked the art, and the music really helped.
In the end, although I'm sure it is filled with emotional meaning for you, I think that it falls short of conveying that. I didn't feel much sense of pathos, watching this. His life was not so bad, not so great, so the story itself was not particularly exciting. There was no character development, so I got no idea of what the man meant in the world. How can I feel anything for a character like that?
So I thought it was refreshing in it's perspective, but it didn't really hit me where it counts.
You weren't suppose to feel emotional apathy for the character's death, but only to relate with him because of the lack of detail in his life. Thanks for the review!
I like the idea
I like the idea, but there was little to no actual movement throughout the animation.
Though, the idea and plot hit me a little bit.
Good effort.
Thanks? thanks for the review!