great animation
I don't like reviewing unless there's a problem needing to be fixed, but the only problem was that the story has unclarified points
who was the girl?
what happened to his wife?
what happened to his mom?
whose funeral is whose?
you need to claify a bit more, I gave a 4/5 though, great job
you just have to think about it, all the answers are in the flash, but here they are...
who was the girl? the yellow girl was his son's girlfriend
what happened to his wife? She grew old, she was the one in the wheel chair at the end...
what happened to his mom? she was really never in the flash... besides as a baby, so lets just say she died...
whose funeral is whose? Grandfather's, His Father's, and His
Thanks for the review, and the vote!
Nice style
Good and effective, for the most part. The art style fit well. Having each character coloured differently gave it a sense of individualism for each character, and properly seperated them throughout the story. What i didn't like is how you chose to draw most of it with a brush tool, but chose certain elements like the car and coffin to be drawn wit the pencil tool. Simply didn't do it for me.
But, if your going to make a flash that is basicly a slide show, it would have been nice to have some added detail. Character models were well done, but more thought put into the backgrounds and maybe seperate fills for all the elements would have done nicely.
The story was an interesting one. Not so much the story itself, but the basic concept you were trying to achieve. I do beleive alot more could have been done with it though. Something a little more thought provoking, ironic, or simply sad. I would have liked this guys life to have been a little more interesting, to say the least. But the whole idea of it was an interesting one at least.
So, story needed some more strength behind it, music worked well, style worked well, and was overall and effective effort. Good job. Hope to see some more from ya.
Thanks number man!
I'm glad you enjoyed it... Thanks for the review, and your vote.
I Likes
I liked this movie..... the music was good and it was thought provoking.
I think there is a lot more to life though.
There is, but this was just a sentimental piece, to remind everyone to get out there and live it up.. Make a difference, and do something amazing.
Thanks for the Vote and review.
Yep...
...that's pretty much how life is, emo kid. Get used to it.
Or, does it have to be that way? What if we didn't age, didn't senesence? Why not support aging research which aims to find a cure for aging once and for all, such as Aubrey de Grey's SENS research? I claim you've got nothing to lose.
http://www.methuselahfoundation.org/
They're always in need of donations.
I'm always in need of donations too :P
thanks for the review, i'm not an emo kid lol...
thanks for the review!
In two minds.
While your artistic expressionism is to be comended, I found your bleak outlook on life as a meaningless cycle of birth and death to be rather depressing.
The animation was quite clever, simplistic design and i found the colours of individual characters to be a very nice concept.
The music was very good, and it fit in well with your theme.
My only problem was that it went too long and was a little depressing. otherwise, keep up the good work!
Yeah, it can be kinda depressing if you look at this as a bad thing, I was simply puttingthat perspective out there. Thanks for the review!