I thought it was alright
Got a pretty cool story going on here so far. Animation was ok but could be better.
Now, I'm not much for being a douche bag by saying you suck and ruin lolcats with your work after only watching part one so I'm going to take the cool guy route and just say, I'm liking it so far, can't wait to check out the rest of them.
Good job so far.
Thank you :D I wish everyone went the cool guy route because part one is the worst one out of all of them (there wasn't a whole lot I could do about it either since it's so plot-heavy).
uhm .. what?
i didn't actualy laugh .. was is suposed to make me laugh? don't get me wrong .. i like cats, and lol .. but i don't think that was in any way funny ..
I LIKED IT!
haha i can has cheesburger? and the cats are just freaky and cool i wonder what the rest of this will be like, what in hell it is and where its going. good work on the animating too its cool how youve incorporated real cat heads and paws. very oiriginal idea on the cat train too i laughed at that. good stuff
Alright ^_^ but could be improved
Ill admit certain references to the lolcats on I CAN HAZ CHEEZE BURGER are good
eg: monorail cat, and happy cat (who doesnt look to happy here :S) ceiling cat coulda been used a tad better rather than that :(
Umm other than that the voices need some work
mabye make some characters sound a tad more sereious?
And look for some of the more memorable cats from I CAN HAZ CHEEZEBURGER
like OMG its a lion cat or mabye the "meer cat immitations"
oh and mabye if your considering having an evil overloard at all in the series you so need to use the famed "I hate everything cat" >:D
other than that you doing fine
this did make the front page of NG ^_^
so good work
Rember :P voices in some cases need to be more serious, and mabye add a few more cats even just in the background of a few scenes EG: I made you a cookie cat selling cookies in the background of the town square thing =]
I look forward to the next one
a word out to other people reveiwing:
Sure not all flash productions meet the expectatons of some veiwers
so said veiwers should suggest something that can help the guy out with the next 5 XD
Ceiling Cat actually will make an appearance (a hilarious one at that). That's just how 'God' was translated using the Lolcat translator, btw.
And yet again I keep telling people: the first segment is the worst one out of the series because the whole project was intended to be a learning experience.
The reason Orion isn't serious ever is because he's the most bland character out of all of them and isn't a real Lolcat.
As far as "Hey you didn't include such and such a cat" (wait till you see the whole thing). Also, there are so many different Lolcats that it would be impossible to include all of them. BUT! After this 6-part story is fully released, I might revisit the Lolcat universe that I set up and do unrelated side stories with some of the Lolcats that I missed.
Thanks for the review btw :)
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ZOMG! Hah, monorail cat cracked me up. Classic. I hope that in the other versions we'll see many more of the mystical lolcats! Especially the "excuse me wtf r u doin?' cat, or others just as exciting. Hah, has anyone seen that hilarious Hannibal Lector cat, that says 'Well now Clarice, hav teh lambs stopped screaming?'?