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Animation was fine even though a loop but if u want people to be excited about this you should show how it happends through the poems story
Reviews for "An Unfortunate Corpse"
Excellent
Even though the animation was looped it was very fluid. The art style was excellent in my humble opinion, and of course I rather enjoyed the poem. Thank you for sharing.
Coudn't finish it
The artwork was good but too intense for my cpu, i was probably getting 10fps
Good
I really liked it. The idea of those combinations worked well.
I just wish that the tale extended past the poem.
DarkGaruda responds:
it does...hmm well it will, thanks for the feedback
Well...
Is alright... The poem's kinda... creepy, i guess...
But notes on the poem: If you're going to write in a set rhythm and rhyme. Keep to the rhythm (even if you break it at the very end to add a certain punch to the final line, make it a bit better than that) some parts of it didn't quite fit for me. And the rhyming was clever in some places, but was kinda weird in others.
Nice... But... It was just a loop of a skeleton (a very well drawn creepy looking skeleton) walking and an alright poem over the top of it (was better than a LOT of poets i have read).
Don't get me wrong, was alright. But not astounding.
DarkGaruda responds:
i agree with the rhythm thing, but i guess i poorly cut and changed the original poem just because it would have gone on for too long or the writing would have gone way too fast. I was just experimenting with things really, i just wanted to get my art and my mates poem out, it was rushed because im leaving for uni so my time on things like this would have been limited.
Thanks for your feedback