very well done, but....
I just dont undestand the score, there really wasnt much to it, it was a bunch of loops, vewell done but nothing special and a poeat was decent, but a struggle to absorb. I watched, and with the poor choice of font and size, I found myself skippiwords to keep up.
I liked your art, andyour story was good but it felt like work.
Too much reading
I like reading I really do. At the same time I'm not a big fan of the George Lucas scrolling up school of reading. Especially in a dark letter font with a dark background while trying to pay attention to the movie. The idea is to make things come together. This does not come together at all. In fact it is quite frustrating to read. I don't wear glasses nor do I need them, and I find it a bit insulting to the audience to expect them to try an enjoy the movie in this format. The graphics are decent with the exception of the tweened walk loop. (If you're going to loop at least make it a frame by frame loop) All together I think the reason it got the score it did is because you're working within the popular "gothic" genre which is fine because it has a decent niche. At the same time I don't think this deserves the score it did because it was overworked in all the wrong ways. Next time consider somebody perhaps reading it as a monologue so it doesn't obscure the work itself. That is what the sound is for. Cut it up in Audacity or something.
Damn it!!
I have an idea, ust put all this text here, that thoes ppl who cant read it - like me, could enjoin this flash. Especially this gothick fonts, killing me,
How could You do this to me,
I smell something delicious but You don't let me eat it, its a torture....
thanks god I'm masochist...:)
Oooh! Creepy!
Deliciously dark! A must-see for all noir lovers! Keep up the great work, DarkGaruda!
WOW!
I Like the story, sound and animation along with your style dude! 10/10
And you should make a series out of this!
BE CAREFUL OF WHAT YOU WISH FOR PEOPLE!!