not bad, gd poetry animation was short but enough
i liked this animation for usually when you click on with a title and a short explanation u get a short film type thing but i was plesantly supprised when i saw that a poem was included and that it wasent just a story but a sort of new old wives tale if you know what i mean :) gd job!
Such potential
Terrific concept, moody music, spectacular artwork, beautifully dark feel, and well-written poetry. But I didn't like it.
You guys really seem to have a good thing going with the poetry/animation mix, which is why I was so disappointed to find that, while the poem was entertaining, the animation itself was nothing more than a well-drawn guy... walking. I think, since you're so good at animation, you should make a real animation. Keep the poem the way it is, and do a full-fledged animated short to match. This really has potential for a darkly beautiful masterpiece. Don't let it go to waste.
Good poem
Why didn't you get a voice actor to read the poem, while telling the story in animation form. The way you executed your idea ended up just being a showcase for the poety, and not much of a movie in and of itself.
6/10
It would've made a good animation, but that's alright. This was something different, which I kinda like. The poem was awesome, reminded me of Poe, and the walking corpse of the man was very well drawn out. Nice music too, just a bit repetitive.
Vote = 4/5
Rating = 6/10
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...uhh
that was kinda creepy nice poem and music but the rest was creepy.