that was great
ihope to see more flash from you soon man, i dig your style*
Reviews for "An Unfortunate Corpse"
...not bad
I like the music and the poetry was awesome, I think you should add a little bit more into the animation, though it was pretty well done, keep it up
Not bad.
If you just make the text a little bigger and put a thin white stroke on it it would be much better.
You truly are an artist..
I also watched and reviewed your submission with the fairies...
I like this one too.
It's just such a pitty that it's so hard to read. The font type and size made it difficult to read but you know that... Perhaps a different font size, and better contrast with the background would make it better.
Also, this is just a story scrolling along a looping background. Couldn't you just animate the story slightly more?
wow
really nice art and fluid animation! the poem was good as well, and the animation captured the essence of that perfectly. very creepy, nice style to the whole thing.
great work!