BLAM!!!
ok you get a zero: first, it's not even close to a parody; second, DBZ isn't even close to being worth made fun of so there's two mistakes there; third, and finally the last mistake was to have your friend or some person try to say something to make you look good or get less blams, but as far as what you did was ok, just don't do anything with DBZ though, honestly you have the correct Idea, it's just that no one will even consider watching anything that even has DBZ in it, but if it was a different parody, I wouldv'e given you at least a three, but please don't waste you time with DBZ.