Reviews for "Chip Shop Adventures"

this is ok

this is actually quite funny, well in some parts


wasn't expecting that! good job! great humor and animation!


I like the casual script with the jack ass behind the counter. Expand on this, make them go places and do stuff and I think you'll have a hit on your hands.


That was pretty good! A little long and drawn, but it was still pretty funny in a he's a total ass-hole kinda way. Keep up the good work!

Put in a bit more effort

Its too average for 5th place. Work on making it less comic-like and more like a flash.

Ups: Bit of humor
DownsL too dead-pan, to short, not that much like a real flash

Work on: Puting in more effort