this is ok
this is actually quite funny, well in some parts
Reviews for "Chip Shop Adventures"
LOL
wasn't expecting that! good job! great humor and animation!
Different.
I like the casual script with the jack ass behind the counter. Expand on this, make them go places and do stuff and I think you'll have a hit on your hands.
Hehe...
That was pretty good! A little long and drawn, but it was still pretty funny in a he's a total ass-hole kinda way. Keep up the good work!
Put in a bit more effort
Its too average for 5th place. Work on making it less comic-like and more like a flash.
Ups: Bit of humor
DownsL too dead-pan, to short, not that much like a real flash
Work on: Puting in more effort