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Reviews for "Pick Up"

i like it

That was a pretty good animation, although i felt a few flaws in it.

+ You're story was very good no problem there, it keeps us wanting to see the rest.
+ You had a wicked battle in there with some funny parts, it was fast and had cool moves and all
+ nice graphics, well drawn characters and all, anime style, i like:)
- Some of the animation went a bit too fast, i had some trouble sometimes following what was going on in the battle, maybe you could do some more detail in it and make us see more of it so we could fully appreciate the fight scenes, it always looks like you cut some parts...he's at one place, and suddenly he's somewhere else so yeah, maybe work on that.
- The voices were very hard to understand, good thing there were subtitles or i wouldn't of been able to follow the story. Maybe try to clarify the voice acting so we could fully understand what they were saying. Also the music muffled them a lot, maybe try and mix the 2 better on the sequel
+ You had good music that went very well with the animation and was pretty entertaining

so overall, good movie, i liked it, just work on some little things and it would be perfect.
keep up the good work!

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MKAY....random violence... I LIKE THAT!!

Wow. That was great.

And piemaneattingpie? Try using proper punctuation. It hurt to read that. Anyway, this was good. There was a little skipping, but that may have been on my end. Good animation, though a little stiff. not bad voices, though they could have eben a little bit louder, or clearer. Quieter music, maybe. Anyway, great job. Can't wait for part two.

Skaijo responds:

I'll certainly do my best to improve the audio clarity in all of my future submissions. Thanks for the valid critique.

Much love,

--Skaijo--

Loved it

I loved this, I hope u make a sequel and continue it. I wanna see if Pat will make it.

If I could give you any advice, it would be, to maybe put a bit more detail into the environments, other than that I loved the style.

Cant wait for more from u. Keep it up!

Hehe.

Didn't know wether to give this a nine or eight, but it doesn't matter. Giving you a one wouldn't make you less of an awsome artist and animator. I like the story, art, and especially the animation. The voice acting was pretty sweet as well. I'll definately keep my eyes open for the sequal.

Oh, one more thing, this reminded me of FLCL a lot... anyone else get that? Am I just crazy?