Reviews for SSAM #1

[soulfood]

Needs Improvement

This was not bad. It seems like you're more of a story teller than an animator. While the story was good, I felt it was a bit too overdramatic at times. Especially near the end.

Also, while it's good, there really was very little animation to speak of. If there was a category to rate on just animation, I would have to give you a low mark as not a lot of work was done in that area.

One other thing, when you said "Their coming back" It should be "They're coming back." Haha, sorry, I'm picky about grammar.

However, overall it was good and I defintely did not give this a blam grade. 2/5 from me.

OurGuardian responds:

Yeah I noticed. The night I finished this I was pretty stoned, I didn't really see this mistake until now. It's so embarrasing...:( Ciao.

[elbeebo]

Cheer up emo kid.

Now I know you'll be slamming on the abuse link when you read this. But seriously, cut the emo blood tears crap. I am really sick of all these teens with hair in front of their eyes thinking they're getting the worst of the world, as though their lives are the worst and no one lavishes them with attention. So, they cut their wrists (horizontally not vertically so that they won't die mind you,) for a cry of attention. Life is what you make of and if you don't realize your actually going to have to work for happiness by not being selfish for a little bit, then you'll just be trapped in your little world of being an attention whore and listening to My Chemical Romance. Get out and have a life and leave the internet to people like me who have no lives. Oh, and the graphics were amateur.

[Xan666]

NEED SPICE

It is not bad, realy.. Only too... Too usual. That someone unnoticed gets beaten up from the boys... And then their girl comes to him.. Just like teenage dirtbag ;) But it is good :)

[styx958]

ahh emo flash

well done and i liked the layer infront that made it all -cardboardy or watever - but damn emo flash? i guess i cant say anything cuz thats wat you make and i cant change your mind - god damn - emo - ITS SO BORING AND LAME - aha there - i said it - im happy now - cuz seriously - im an insecure person that often randomly gets depressed - but its not like thats interesting

[Shady-Manson]

Simple but NIce.

that was a nice story man and actually sad :( poor little fella with his funky hair which is actually basically mine HAHA.

but yeah was a cool thing man. i'm gonna watch the others now.

Shady.