This has Screensaver written all over it
and nothing more
this could actually be a screensaver
if you look at the people running around for a really long time it looks like they are bumping into eachother..
not up to par dude
doesn't hold a candle to any of your other work that I've seen, which has been extremely impressive. Why embarass yourself? The joke is amusing, but only mildly so -- you don't need to rush out and slap together a twenty minute crapjob just to crack a joke. Save this sort of shit for when it fits into a larger context. This would have been blammed if it weren't for your fans.
Not trying to be a dick, love your work -- just speaking my mind.
It's funny because it's true.