Dementia has gotten the best of me it seems...

At 8/29/08 07:01 PM, Fatchaos wrote: More incoming, maybe this time I even remember to acctually blody upload the picture...

So, I kinda wanted to draw Algra again, only to find myself running out of paper space (thats why the legs are partly missing...), which is bad, since I planned on having a bloody gorefest of corpses on her feet, but alas, I had to settle with one decapitated head.

Otherwise I kinda like it.

Nice, Very nice, but I think you should've made the blood a darker shade..... makes it stand out more...

At 8/23/08 02:16 PM, ScorpianX0 wrote:

At 8/23/08 01:58 PM, crazygiraffe wrote:

i've never used ms paint before because i have common sense and don't take advice from idiots(it was on flash 2004 which kinda looks like ms paint).

flash or Ms paint, it still sucks.

GTFO of this thread unless you're gonna comment on Fatchaos's work. And don't be a smart-ass about it.

it is still 2004 edition

it is really blocky

sooo...... your artwork has shown improvement fatchos, you still draw human chins to wide. besides most of your drawings being perverted they are in a whole good

just get a girlfriend or something and your need to draw stuff like that will decrease

sooo...... your artwork has shown improvement fatchos, you still draw human chins to wide.

I suck at faces, to tell you the truth, I should really practice it more (and propably will)

just get a girlfriend or something and your need to draw stuff like that will decrease

Hahah, even If I did get one, I still wouldn't stop drawing like that, but, I haven't planned on drawing any adult pics in the nearby future...

Nice, Very nice, but I think you should've made the blood a darker shade..... makes it stand out more...

The excact reason why Im going to buy some more pencils today, that one I currently use is just not suited for anything but precise lining.

Thanks for the feedback!

Well, the new pencils didn't make that much difference, would be better if I had a scanner. But, they will do well with my comic project I will begin... someday.

So, decided to finalize with a quickish pic what Algra would really look like.

So, Im beign held in the barracks for the next weekend, so no uploads then...
I will be able to check back from time to time (expect on Saturday & Sunday), so I might as well use my "free" time there to produce sketches.
(Sidenote... only 120 days left of the army....... I can make it....)

Things to come (propably);
- I feel I can finaly try & draw a dragon in the form she deserves (not an anthro!)
- If I can, I will try to make a duo pic of Gelorah & Algra...
- If I have the time left, I will try with scenery &... stuff.

How well I can keep up with my things to draw list depends on the time I get on my hands, and that can differ greatly.

Make my time at the barracks more worthwhile and post comments, suggestions & critics of my work, I would really appreciate that.

To the barracks....................

- I feel I can finaly try & draw a dragon in the form she deserves (not an anthro!)

Oh yes indeed, I managed to whip up something I can acctually be proud off. Uploads coming on Thursday, and I will color this piece.

- If I can, I will try to make a duo pic of Gelorah & Algra...

Bah, this I unfortunately hadn't the time to do... I merely finished Gelorah and that wasn't excatly perfect, not to mention I didnt even shade & color him.

- If I have the time left, I will try with scenery &... stuff.

OMGWTF Fatchaos doing scenery practice? Yup. Some I might even upload if the digcam wont screw them up too badly. I also managed to combine both practice and, uh, fun. So, I made a scenery with Algra taking a dip in a lake (human...). Guess it turned alright.

I'm so waiting for Thursday..............

Make my time at the barracks more worthwhile and post comments, suggestions & critics of my work, I would really appreciate that.

I meant that, people!

moar blod plox.

At 9/9/08 12:25 PM, Vousielle wrote: moar blod plox.

You violent bastard.
Alright, I will try to add more gore...

That is if I understood you right... :P

At 9/9/08 12:26 PM, Fatchaos wrote:

At 9/9/08 12:25 PM, Vousielle wrote: moar blod plox.

You violent bastard.
Alright, I will try to add more gore...

That is if I understood you right... :P

hurray!

hurray!

I hope you like cartoon violence too, because I finally decided to try and draw the first strips of my comic project on weekend (the one I talked about some time ago and never got to start with it). And I came up with a cheeeeesy name for it.

Dragonfodder!

I hope my humor just isn't too low... well, that remains to be seen.

Good amount of details here as usual. I like that Algra chick, good waist and hip shape. And youre right, you need to work some more on the face, especially the outline of it. Also i wish you could make her hands bigger though.

Anyways, your work is still oozin of eroticism. I like your reptiles, you just need to practice more on humans. Thats that. Keep it up :)

At 9/9/08 12:37 PM, Fatchaos wrote:

hurray!

I hope you like cartoon violence too, because I finally decided to try and draw the first strips of my comic project on weekend

Dragonfodder!

I hope my humor just isn't too low... well, that remains to be seen.

Sounds interesting......

At 9/9/08 01:16 PM, Hammi wrote: Good amount of details here as usual. I like that Algra chick, good waist and hip shape. And youre right, you need to work some more on the face, especially the outline of it. Also i wish you could make her hands bigger though.

I decided that she would need to look hot as a human too. Excotic!
(And I did a quickie with her taking a dip in the lake, I will upload that tomorrow with my other new pieces too... That must be like my first non-anthro K-15 pic I ever have made for public release... :F)

Anyways, your work is still oozin of eroticism. I like your reptiles, you just need to practice more on humans. Thats that. Keep it up :)

Indeed, I'm kinda using Algra as my training with anatomy (Since I can train both human & anthro on her!). While I feel like the overall anatomy is right, I still think the faces are something to look into, and the hands, while not completely bad, are something I should also work on.

Sounds interesting.....

I'v got some cheesy ideas...

At 9/10/08 11:27 AM, Fatchaos wrote:

Sounds interesting.....

I'v got some cheesy ideas...

It can't be as bad as the other comics on this site....

It can't be as bad as the other comics on this site....

Thats excatly why I think I could acctually show some quality.
Well, time will tell, I will propably start on them by tomorrow.

God only knows if my inking will totally mess the strips up, havn't tried yet.

Alright... I managed to do the uploading (mostly, since I sadly had to remove the Algra taking a dip in the lake, I found too many problems in it [mostly caused by the digicam]). Also the fact that a mere sicpack of stronger than average beer can make me quite tipsy could have caused that.

But, nevertheless, let's start with the less important. A simple scenery practice. And the reason for the paper beign torn at the lighthouse is merely due to my stupid comrades at the barracks. I think the water looked a bit better on paper but, whatever.

Alrgiht, this one isn't even finished yet. Just thought I'd show you anyway. Tried a different kind of perspective here, and just for Vousielle, the finished product (whenever that comes) will have even more blood & gore!

And last, but not the least. Meet Venzyriel!

I have drawn her before, but I completely updated her outlook to look much, much more better, and gave her a name.

Enjoy. Lining is on progress as I upload ^^

I will propably leave that cheesy background out from the final product.

At 9/11/08 06:29 PM, Fatchaos wrote: Alrgiht, this one isn't even finished yet. Just thought I'd show you anyway. Tried a different kind of perspective here, and just for Vousielle, the finished product (whenever that comes) will have even more blood & gore!

I love the perspective even more than the blood!

I love the perspective even more than the blood!

I will add more blood to it once I get the time to finish it... there is a nice space out there for one (two?), fallen, suffering (disembered...? Hmmm...) victims...

Rawr big momma

Your stuff is still lookin' good there Fatchaos.

At 9/11/08 08:09 PM, Vousielle wrote:
I love the perspective even more than the blood!

I'm gonna have to agree on that one, this pic is great :D !

actually, all of these new ones look good....... Very nice job!

I'm gonna have to agree on that one, this pic is great :D !

actually, all of these new ones look good....... Very nice job!

I just hope that once I get it finished I could also gather enough motivation to color it... :F

Your stuff is still lookin' good there Fatchaos.

Heh, I try not to let people down...

Rawr big momma

Heh, just wait till I get her colored.

Dragonfodder might get delayed by some issues down by my own side, but it will be shown... someday.

Here's something I didn't acctually plan on doign so shortly. Decided that since I updated Kamata, I should also update her armor & gear too! Here goes :F Might even finish this piece.

Even though I think that katana's are overused these days, I still made her blade look more like one :E

Venzyriel , complete!

Since I have nothing better to do right now, I might as well give some background on her (omgscrolltothebottom)!

The Silver Dragon (aka Thunderdragon, Stormdragon) Venzyriel is still rather young in draconic standards, but almost posesses the wisdom of an elder. Little of her past is known to common man, since she has always shown a more passive role in historic events. She rarely shows to anyone, and she is quite arrogant, but is not known to be hostile, either.

As a Silver Dragon, she can generaly summon a thunderstorm at any location to her control, spit lightning fierce enough to reduce stone into dust. She is better at flying than other, heavier dragons. But she is also physically weaker, and has a smaller body frame.

Venzyriel has shown great hatred for the Earthym Order, that stands for purifying all the abominations from the face of the earth. Earthym Order is extremely powerful, and has gone as far as slaying dragons & demons. Magic is only tolerated by specific, trained individuals. The Earthym Order is ruled by Arch wizard Aerthumis.

Since Venzyriel, in all her power, could not match Earthym Order, she has taken a different approach as a solution. Rather than hiding or leavin her homeland, she has decided to gather followers. She began by choosing a disciple. She soon found Gelorah, an war-orphan.
Why a dragon would take a disciple, is beyond public understanding. The disciple, Gelorah, does, however have dragonic heritage, be it even as small & old as it is. Where this heritage originaly began is not even known to Venzyriel herself. But she does know the heritage is from a Silver Dragon, making Gelorah the perfect disciple, since she was able to tap that heritage into it's full potential. Many think that Gelorah is merely a tool brainwashed by Venzyriel, but Venzyriel has shown extra caring for Gelorah, caring that is very uncommon among dragons. Gelroah is, nevertheless, an extremely loyal servant who is already in a command of a small army. The army consists of northern warriors (who think dragons as avatars of the gods), and many who simply reject the Earthym Order. An interesting follower that stands out is the half-demon Algra, who has a major role among the northen warrior tribes. Her true motives, however, remains to be seen.

Yup. A lot of stuff goes in my mind when I get a chance to think about them.

Anyway, hope you like the pic more than the dry story.

Jeez....... I can't believe I just read that whole post........

You have a very complex, yet interesting story-line to your characters

BTW: these pics look great, but the 1st one kinda bugs me in some way though ( I can't put my finger on it )

Me and my crappy criticism........ I couldn't even tell you what I think you could improve on XD.........

I don't know....... But they look nice though. I like how you went into detail about the weopons in the 1st pic........ and as always, I like your colored work :P

Nice story and good piece.
Just an opinion though, work a little bit more w/ your anatomy and shading.

At 9/13/08 05:31 AM, Erione5143 wrote: Nice story and good piece.
Just an opinion though, work a little bit more w/ your anatomy and shading.

I love & hate anatomy at the same time. When it succeedes, it looks good. When it does not, like most of the time with me... well...