'Bout time I finished this (sorry, was busy playing Dead Space)!
Anyway, did some major redesing (I love that sentence...; 'Major redesing'), and I guess I could be happy with the outcome. I originally didnt intend his eyes to have a slightly cliché glow, but my little brother said you should. Hmph.
Oh, and just because I'm slightly bored atm, you guessed it, background story!
The Dragon Disciple, Gelorah
When he was a very young boy, he became an orphan, and was adopted by a small village. Sooner or later, the villagers sold him as a slave. After spending several months as a slave, the Earthym Order local garrison slew the slavers & freed all the slaves. A certain lady adopted him, and soon after the lady & the boy dissapeared. Wild rumors were that the lady was a vampire, witch or even a necromancer. But she was much, much more...
After Venzyriel took him under her wisdom & protection, Gelorah grew in a strict enviroment, but was never treaten poorly. He was trained in the way of the sword, and after he turned to a young adult, Venzyriel decided to tap the heritage Gelorah possessed... For he had a hinch of dragon blood running trough his veins, ancient, but yet so powerfull. Gelorah soon could summon lighting from his fingers, and wield his trusty 'Queen's Tear' dual-blade sword with just one hand, not to mention he could move quite fast with heavy armor. Though rarely seen, he could also transform into a half-dragon, for a brief time.
Gelorah acts as the right hand of Venzyriel, gathering followers to his mistressess Storm Covenant. He commands the troops, plans attacks, and takes a significant role in the battle. He personaly picks the best of the best to become his liutenants, also known as Strom Knights. But above his liutenants are two overseers, Algra & Cael. But above all, is Venzyriel, who Gelorah thinks of a Goddess.
Not so important features;
The sword, 'Queen's tear' was given to him when he turned 17, straight from Vebzyriels treasury. The sword itself only acts as a sword should, not bearing any enchantments. However, should Gelorah decide to add a little extra kick to the sword, he could always use two hands to wield it, providing a nasty, electric supprise to a foe unfortunate enough to meet the blade. Gelorah's armor was desinged by Algra, who is a rather talented smith. The armor acts as a steel hide and provides excelent protection, and due to Gelorah's inhuman strenght, he can move with it at ease. Even though Gelorah is a rather gentle by nature, he is somewhat cold towards others, distant even. He simply ignores all dsitractions... Expect when he's drunk. And his alcohol tolerance is pretty much non-excistent. Due to that, he tends not to drink it.
Aye, thats about it, I hope you just skipped the bulls***.