At 6/18/10 07:23 AM, LaserKarl wrote:
You've got style, color, details and composition down really well! I love seeing someone handle colors with style. What bugs me in these pictures are the disoriented shapes. This is a classic graffiti-problem, haha.
Am I right when I guess you start working with details before you've defined shapes and light? Excuse me if Im just jumping conclusions.
Your stuff (except the jade kitty temple) has an slight flat feeling to it, and thats a shame. Do you have any still life-drawings you can show?
Also, dont hold back, spam too many pictures a day! :D
no need to be excused, im glad for everything you said...something tells me this conversation may...leak secrets of finally figuring out what im doing wrong...
i dont start with details first, i generally start with large color fields or siloettes and then start crafting up from there. but i believe that i overwork areas, and basically get rid of everything i started with in the end. but to be honest. i dont know that i have a process yet. so many have been different, as this type of thing artistically is a new thing for me
graffiti ruins art lives
:3
serious though, ive used it as a crutch for far too long. its allowed me to ignore basics and fundementals up until now to have everything i do written off as "style" which works, and i could sit here and try to say it now, and prolly make a good case of it, but the fact is, that eventually id hope i could leave it behind. or at very least leave it in its place and keep it out of my art :3
that flat feeling is another biproduct of graffiti im afraid...it was a specific look i aimed for when doing my letter work...i wasnt a fan of the super 3-d looks like a sculpture kind of graffiti, though i also didnt enjoy painting traditionally, so i figured a way to get the visual impact of a flat image with the techniques of a 3-d painter. I've noticed this problem lately and been trying to fix it.
i find the only time i truely get the depth i want in an image is when doing enviroments. but i believe it may be because i have more practice with them.
as it stands now, i only have about 6-7 months under my belt in the trying to draw....the way im drawing now, my first portrait ever was done january this year, also the first time i opened an anatomy book and rushed out to buy a tablet...
as for still lifes...i dont think i will find any on my hard drive, not that ive never done them, i just...never cared for them as anything more than warm ups to get my painting muscles all warmed up and what nots. though i will look for some in my old canvas stacks and sketch books and see what i cant find.
gahhhh i rambled
ty for the kind words and the critique, please feel....encouraged to tear apart anything you see from me in here, i welcome it ...and in fact am very pleased that you said something about it :D
now im going to post a drawing...since drawings>me rambling
narrrrrr