Hey my bands just released a new one.
Any reviews are welcomed.

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  by <deleted>

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NAG!! dang it i was so proud of that review too... but that submit review button had to be so dam flashe >.>. I guess it doesn't count if i forgot to put Review Request Club in the bottom... i put it in the Title tho but wth. WHERES THE EDIT BUTTON DX

oh it's just one point...
well screw that i thought it was 7...
my bad xP stay cool guys xD

At 11/9/09 03:30 PM, Kirbyfemur wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/2 86876
Here be a new songeth. I'll start on some of the reviews later, gots todo some schoolin. =3

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  Brittle Nature (WIP)

  by Kirbyfemur

  Doodalee Doodalee Do

  Loop

  Miscellaneous

  1,183 Views

  PLAY

Okay sorry about this, but i deleted the first post of this, so negate that one and use this for the reviews. SORRY!!! And is kirk okay? I'm not inpatient, just hoping life hasn't gotten to him and struck him straight in the balls.

At 11/8/09 03:00 PM, Kirbyfemur wrote: I know it would be kind of unfair to keep the update waiting just for a couple of people.

Two things: sometimes I can't update the list in time because of real life facts or events, my goal isn't to penalize or to favour any member who haven't done 'em all yet, I just can't do otherwise. And some other times, when someone needs a bit more time, I like to give extra time to poeple who usually hit the 100% completion ratio so it's all good fun.

That and I hope you've taken Fro off the list so his rate doesn't keep going down lol

If I take him off the list all his stats will be lost, that's better than having his stats going down a bit. I'm sure he's fine with it :).

At 11/9/09 04:53 PM, sarias wrote: Just thought I would throw out there that this has to be one of the best reviews I have ever got It is fair.

Yeah that's one kick ass review but you don't really need to post the whole review on the thread, all of us are aware of Supersteph's awesomeness :D and it makes the thread more difficult to look at. Though you are welcome to post something about the reviews you receive from the club :).

At 11/11/09 02:57 PM, Joshsouza wrote: I think I just gave out my longest review EVER for this piece at the bottom, here it goes:

Same thing for you. Also good job on the review ;)
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The requests you have to review for next update on Sunday can be found here, don't forget to the review the extra audio requests which are displayed in Supersteph's posts just below the list. I'll update my newspost if Joshsouza send me the file with html tags.

Here is finally the update, I had a bunch of things to do... Enjoy.

Member's Update #19:
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]

1 ) 2625 | 407 / 407 | 100.00% || 136 | 21 / 21 | 100.00% Coop83
2 ) 2601 | 403 / 408 | 098.77% || 136 | 21 / 21 | 100.00% Haggard
3 ) 2281 | 352 / 391 | 090.03% || 003 | 00 / 20 | 000.00% Fro
4 ) 1572 | 249 / 295 | 084.41% || 099 | 16 / 21 | 076.19% Supersteph54
5 ) 1199 | 184 / 385 | 047.79% || 003 | 00 / 21 | 000.00% Insanimation
06 ) 881 | 138 / 144 | 095.83% || 136 | 21 / 21 | 100.00% Darklight17
07 ) 382 | 063 / 408 | 015.44% || 005 | 01 / 21 | 004.76% milinko959
08 ) 247 | 039 / 039 | 100.00% || 123 | 20 / 20 | 100.00% Kirbyfemur
09 ) 146 | 015 / 407 | 003.69% || 003 | 00 / 21 | 000.00% Sonofkirk
10 ) 090 | 014 / 145 | 009.66% || 000 | 00 / 21 | 000.00% IamWeird33 *
11 ) 056 | 009 / 079 | 011.39% || 000 | 00 / 21 | 000.00% CaptainAwesome121090 *
12 ) 025 | 004 / 020 | 020.00% || 025 | 04 / 20 | 020.00% Joshsouza
13 ) 008 | 001 / 021 | 004.76% || 008 | 01 / 21 | 004.76% Celx-Requin

The stars indicate for how long the user has been inactive in this club. "Inactive" means, that user hasn't gained any points by reviewing OR by posting.
*: User has been inactive last week
**: User has been inactive for the last two weeks
***: User has been inactive for the last three weeks
****: User has been inactive for the last four weeks

If you are inactive for more than three weeks AND if your completion rate falls below 20%, OR if you are inactive for more than four weeks you are excluded from the list. You may rejoin this club, but your points will be lost.

Statistics:
*Requests this week: 21
Total requests all time: 408
Review made this week: 105
Average per member: 8.077
Average per request: 5

*New To the List: Joshsouza, Celx-Requin
Leaving the List: Soapbubble

*All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Darklight17 and Kirbyfemur

Member's Update #18 - 11/02/09

At 11/12/09 07:34 AM, Sonofkirk wrote:

Just thought I would throw out there that this has to be one of the best reviews I have ever got It is fair.

all of us are aware of Supersteph's awesomeness :D

I'm flattered :3.

At 11/11/09 02:57 PM, Joshsouza wrote: I think I just gave out my longest review EVER for this piece at the bottom, here it goes:

Nice review, Josh. I have someone to look up to when I write my art reviews :D.

Here is finally the update, I had a bunch of things to do... Enjoy.

Thanks for the update!

Member's Update #19:
[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]

3 ) 2281 | 352 / 391 | 090.03% || 003 | 00 / 20 | 000.00% Fro

Poor Fro XD.

4 ) 1572 | 249 / 295 | 084.41% || 099 | 16 / 21 | 076.19% Supersteph54

Not a bad week. I still need to finish them all, though :(. I actually had this amount of reviews done by Monday night, and since Sonofkirk was delaying the update, I thought I could do more. Sadly I was in the middle of a huge computer project which had to be done today (Thursday) and I spent all day and almost all night working on it O.O. Now, as incredibly ironic as it sounds, he didn't show up today at school, so all that work was for nothing x.x.

5 ) 1199 | 184 / 385 | 047.79% || 003 | 00 / 21 | 000.00% Insanimation

Please review s'more Insanimation, I wont sleep at night with Darklight behind me. D:

06 ) 881 | 138 / 144 | 095.83% || 136 | 21 / 21 | 100.00% Darklight17

Well, you got all the reviews again, Darky. Do you mind if I call you Darky?

How about Dorky? :P

Seriously though, you were writing such long reviews. Howcome you suddenly swiched to 3-5 liners? :(

08 ) 247 | 039 / 039 | 100.00% || 123 | 20 / 20 | 100.00% Kirbyfemur

2 weeks and you're already up in the ranks. Keep up the awesome work, man :). (Just don't pass me :P)

*New To the List: Joshsouza, Celx-Requin

2 new people... awesome :3.

Leaving the List: Soapbubble

Aww man, you were a good member. Sad to see you go :(.

*All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Darklight17 and Kirbyfemur

I bet you guys are missing me up there...

I'll update my newspost if Joshsouza send me the file with html tags.

What do you mean about that?

At 11/12/09 07:34 AM, Sonofkirk wrote: [#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]

Sorry but im a bit lost in these statistics ^ ^... i don't get the ratios or the gain.

Gain: is the gain the number of points added... no that cant be it... yeah i don't really get it at all.
Ratios: are the ratios supposed to compare the number of songs/flash/art reviewed to the number of songs/flash/art not review? well that can't really be possible unless each reviewer must submit a review for every request of the week.

sorry for wasting your time but this is really bugging me xP thanks in advance. oh and one last thing... i am officialy in the club so will be on the next board right? or is there a delay or something?

The requests you have to review for next update on Sunday can be found here, don't forget to the review the extra audio requests which are displayed in Supersteph's posts just below the list.

I made a mistake I thought the reviews we're supposed to do for next Sunday were the ones we were supposed to do this week.

So I guess I have no points yet until the next list on Sunday?

Can someone clarify?
Sorry!
- Celx

At 11/12/09 07:34 AM, Sonofkirk wrote:

At 11/8/09 03:00 PM, Kirbyfemur wrote: That and I hope you've taken Fro off the list so his rate doesn't keep going down lol

If I take him off the list all his stats will be lost, that's better than having his stats going down a bit. I'm sure he's fine with it :).

And if he isn't, there's not much he can do about it anyway. :P

Member's Update #19:

Thanks for the update!

[#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]
1 ) 2625 | 407 / 407 | 100.00% || 136 | 21 / 21 | 100.00% Coop83
2 ) 2601 | 403 / 408 | 098.77% || 136 | 21 / 21 | 100.00% Haggard

Top 2 still going strong. Very nice. :)

06 ) 881 | 138 / 144 | 095.83% || 136 | 21 / 21 | 100.00% Darklight17
08 ) 247 | 039 / 039 | 100.00% || 123 | 20 / 20 | 100.00% Kirbyfemur

And two more users on the rise. Keep it up!

*New To the List: Joshsouza, Celx-Requin

Hi there!

Leaving the List: Soapbubble

Oh. :(
He wrote some nice reviews, too bad he's gone now. :/

*All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Darklight17 and Kirbyfemur

A party of 4 is nice. But there's still some room over here! :)

At 11/12/09 10:46 AM, Joshsouza wrote: I'll update my newspost if Joshsouza send me the file with html tags.

What do you mean about that?

Oh, just because he usually puts the request list on his userpage in a news post, so if you have the requests list on a .txt file or saved somewhere, you could put it on a file hosting website and he could copy it into his news post. Not a big deal anyway, now you know in case you end up doing it next time :P.

At 11/12/09 10:50 AM, aliaspharow wrote:

At 11/12/09 07:34 AM, Sonofkirk wrote: [#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]

Sorry but im a bit lost in these statistics ^ ^... i don't get the ratios or the gain.

Gain: is the gain the number of points added... no that cant be it... yeah i don't really get it at all.

Hehe, you got me explaining to you again XP. Anyway, it's the amount of points you've gained throughout week. For example, in one week you did 5 reviews with the sig under every one which makes 30 points, and you posted at least once during the week. Under the 'Gain' statistic next to your name, there would be 33, which would be added to your total points.

Ratios: are the ratios supposed to compare the number of songs/flash/art reviewed to the number of songs/flash/art not review? well that can't really be possible unless each reviewer must submit a review for every request of the week.

Basically, your total ratio is a percentage of the amount of requests you've reviewed vs the total amount of requests you should've done. So, if you reviewed 100/200 requests ever since you joined the club, your total ratio would be 50.00%.

sorry for wasting your time but this is really bugging me xP thanks in advance.

No problem ;).

oh and one last thing... i am officialy in the club so will be on the next board right? or is there a delay or something?

You have to post the points you gained throughout the week before you're a club member. When you're finished of the requests in the requests list on page 34, post your points in the thread at least 1 day before the update and then you're part of the club. Next update should be sometime around Sunday or Monday.

At 11/12/09 11:39 AM, Celx-Requin wrote:

The requests you have to review for next update on Sunday can be found here, don't forget to the review the extra audio requests which are displayed in Supersteph's posts just below the list.

I made a mistake I thought the reviews we're supposed to do for next Sunday were the ones we were supposed to do this week.

So I guess I have no points yet until the next list on Sunday?

Can someone clarify?
Sorry!
- Celx

(Sorry for double post)

Yeah :(. I thought it was a bit of a bummer that you did 1 review only, but at least now I know it was a mistake :).

I dunno if Sonofkirk will reset your points or not, you'll have to ask him.

Seriously, though... Am I a pro at quick answers or what?

At 11/12/09 10:50 AM, aliaspharow wrote:

At 11/12/09 07:34 AM, Sonofkirk wrote: [#] [Total] [Total Stats] [Total Ratio] || [Gain] [Weekly Stats] [Weekly Ratio] [Username]

Sorry but im a bit lost in these statistics ^ ^... i don't get the ratios or the gain.

Gain: is the gain the number of points added... no that cant be it...

Yes it is. Gain indicates how many points a member made last week.

Ratios: are the ratios supposed to compare the number of songs/flash/art reviewed to the number of songs/flash/art not review? well that can't really be possible unless each reviewer must submit a review for every request of the week.

Ratios: The first one is the total ratio. "Total number of reviews done" divided by "total number of reviews this member COULD HAVE done".
The second ratio is the ratio for the last week. "Number of reviews done last week" divided by "number of requests on the list"

i am officialy in the club so will be on the next board right? or is there a delay or something?

You will be added to the list once you think you reviewed enough requests of the list posted earlier in this thread and post how many points you gathered here.
By doing so you show that you understood the points system. After Sonofkirk added you to the list you don't have to keep track of your own score.

At 11/12/09 11:39 AM, Celx-Requin wrote:

The requests you have to review for next update on Sunday can be found here, don't forget to the review the extra audio requests which are displayed in Supersteph's posts just below the list.

I made a mistake I thought the reviews we're supposed to do for next Sunday were the ones we were supposed to do this week.
So I guess I have no points yet until the next list on Sunday?

Sorry, if you missed the requests last week there's no way for you to gain those points in a later week. It would just be too much work for the user who updates the list to go through all the old requests again to see if anyone else reviewed a request at a later time.

Sorry, if you missed the requests last week there's no way for you to gain those points in a later week. It would just be too much work for the user who updates the list to go through all the old requests again to see if anyone else reviewed a request at a later time.

No I think I was over credited.
The points I posted were for the current week?

I only did one review last week, if that's what was counted that's fine...
I'm just wanting to clarify.

Thanks,
- Celx

I'm glad to be among the peoples to have finished all of the requests. And a little piece of advice to supersteph54 (Hope i didn't misspeel), if ya want to get them done faster, stop writing such good reviews! =P

Yeah thanks for all the info...i'm not usualy this stupid, it's just that i assumed things that wern't true. no further questions xP. oh and for kirbyfemur, hes not getting all the points because he's to busy getting me to understand and he understands that it is quality before quantity xP.

At 11/12/09 03:23 PM, Corky52 wrote: I have a feeling that Fro doesn't care about his score dropping anymore as he doesn't want to be a part of the club. :P

Oh, I hope that feeling is only a feeling and not a fact. D:

At 11/12/09 04:34 PM, Kirbyfemur wrote: I'm glad to be among the peoples to have finished all of the requests.

Lucky you :(.

And a little piece of advice to supersteph54 (Hope i didn't misspeel), if ya want to get them done faster, stop writing such good reviews! =P

I want to get them done AND write such good reviews XD. In other words, no... you will NEVER see a 5-liner audio review from me from now on. NEVER!! XD XD By the way, you didn't misspell Supersteph54... you just misspelt misspell XP.

At 11/12/09 05:57 PM, aliaspharow wrote: oh and for kirbyfemur, hes not getting all the points because he's to busy getting me to understand and he understands that it is quality before quantity xP.

I couldn't have said it any better :D.

At 11/13/09 02:46 AM, Supersteph54 wrote:

At 11/12/09 04:34 PM, Kirbyfemur wrote: I'm glad to be among the peoples to have finished all of the requests.

Lucky you :(.

Sowwy bud =|

And a little piece of advice to supersteph54 (Hope i didn't misspeel), if ya want to get them done faster, stop writing such good reviews! =P

I want to get them done AND write such good reviews XD. In other words, no... you will NEVER see a 5-liner audio review from me from now on. NEVER!! XD XD By the way, you didn't misspell Supersteph54... you just misspelt misspell XP.

Haha Kinda did that on purpose =P

At 11/12/09 05:57 PM, aliaspharow wrote: oh and for kirbyfemur, hes not getting all the points because he's to busy getting me to understand and he understands that it is quality before quantity xP.

I couldn't have said it any better :D.

Well DUH, i'd go for quality any day. Hell you could give a good one sentence review if you know proper sentence structure and good criticism techniques. But unfortunately it would seem no one has figured out a good one line review yet so yeah.

At 11/12/09 07:34 AM, Sonofkirk wrote: 1 ) 2625 | 407 / 407 | 100.00% || 136 | 21 / 21 | 100.00% Coop83
2 ) 2601 | 403 / 408 | 098.77% || 136 | 21 / 21 | 100.00% Haggard
3 ) 2281 | 352 / 391 | 090.03% || 003 | 00 / 20 | 000.00% Fro

Thanks for the update, Sonofkirk. Very nice stuff. Looks like I'll have to give a few of my pieces for review if we see weeks as quiet as this one coming up :P

*All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Darklight17 and Kirbyfemur

Well, myself and Haggard are still here. I'm looking forward to seeing Fro rejoin us and congratulations to Darklight and Kirbyfemur for joining us.

At 11/12/09 10:46 AM, Joshsouza wrote: I'll update my newspost if Joshsouza send me the file with html tags.

What do you mean about that?

He means the text file with all of the links prepared to go into a Newgrounds News or BBS post. One that has all of the HTML code in it (ins for underlines, em for italics, strong for bold and a=href for links)

Can I join the club???
Joshsouza invited me!!!

At 11/13/09 12:31 PM, SCTE3 wrote: Looking from your reviews I'd ask you look at reviews of AnalPenguinFarming, Fro, Coop83 or others on the active roster list for an idea of how to review, or possibly check the review guides scattered on NG before allowing one to join. =/

OK right, thanks man, sorry bout the bother...

At 11/13/09 12:31 PM, SCTE3 wrote:

At 11/13/09 12:20 PM, RogerBK wrote: Can I join the club???

Looking from your reviews I'd ask you look at reviews of AnalPenguinFarming, Fro, Coop83 or others on the active roster list for an idea of how to review, or possibly check the review guides scattered on NG before allowing one to join. =/

Joshsouza invited me!!!

Heh, first time in quite a while that I wasn't the one who (dis)approved a member :P. Anyway, in addition to what SCTE3 said, you could check out here, here and here to see how to write good reviews ;).

Its Ok guys, thanks about the support!!!
u are awesome!!!

Hey, you guys are currently helping me with my music more than anyone else on the site. Thank You!

But seriously, would you mind helping me out with this one?

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  -)S(- Live Out Loud!

  by Will

  Reach out into the crowded masses and make yourself heard. Nobody will ignore you!

  Song

  Techno

  2,368 Views

  PLAY

Wait a minute? Isn't your name Rogersmax?

• Unpublished Submission

It's far from my best work... I'm not too proud of this one, but any criticism is appreciated anyway.

This was less one of those "I put tons of effort into making this sound amazing" and more one of those "I put tons of effort and time into just finishing the damn song." I rarely finish my projects, so I'm trying to finish what I start, regardless of how awful it sounds... Don't worry, I won't be uploading all the suck that I make. I'm uploading this one because I think it has a lot of potential and there's a lot of elements I like in it.

At 11/13/09 05:44 PM, Joshsouza wrote: Wait a minute? Isn't your name Rogersmax?

??
nope!!
OMG!!!
I wrote the wrong name!!
sorry Joshsouza, i think i put ctrl v of the wrong user...
sorry 'bout that guys!!

If I didn't already request reviews for these, I'd like to request reviews for this

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  Messy robot Repair

  by Sawdust

  A simple song with a ton of synths and drumloops

  Song

  Techno

  952 Views

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and this

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  Distant Texture

  by Sawdust

  ambient track made with lots of love, ENJOY

  Song

  Ambient

  870 Views

  PLAY

Thanks!

At 11/13/09 12:20 PM, RogerBK wrote: Can I join the club???
Joshsouza invited me!!!

I've had a look at your reviews. Currently, the answer is no. Give it some time, learn to put spaces between your paragraphs and stop with the damned YouTube comments.

I'm not ruling you out ad infinitum, but you've got to take some steps forward to get in here, basically.

I finally had time to make a new song (education's been a real bitch lately). Club, do your stuff...

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  Lost Entity (Dance Remix)

  by DJ-Chilvan

  A quick paced, agile, nonstop dance song with extensive melody.

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  Dance

  2,591 Views

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