ok thx i'l try my best to get better, i just started drawing.

hey guys i took some advice. this is wut i got now.
please do give me feedback on it:

At 2/16/09 11:00 AM, Breaktroll wrote:

At 2/12/09 04:20 PM, Breaktroll wrote: here's another one! i think fits well with the inritus theme.

oh no, wait, i think i does better goes with the tractus theme, seeing as space is just a toy for it.

You're right. To Noneused, i like the first one....

At 2/16/09 05:36 PM, noneused wrote: hey guys i took some advice. this is wut i got now.
please do give me feedback on it:

its a little better , you need to work on those feet

k il try to combine both opinions to make it better.

k i tried my best so what do u guys think?:

At 2/2/09 08:50 AM, roojames wrote: I call him Boris.

I call him Neo-Cortex...

hey guys look now it looks as if it just wrestled a huge tiger or something

hey wut do u know, spidey turned out to be a blood sucker!

k i got some minor adjustments

At 2/16/09 09:37 PM, noneused wrote: k i got some minor adjustments

thats some mean flea

indeed, one very mean flee, >.>...need a bug bomb, but then again, those things only make them horny lol

At 2/16/09 10:14 PM, richler wrote:

At 2/16/09 09:37 PM, noneused wrote: k i got some minor adjustments

thats some mean flea

mean flea indeed.

here's a screen of the final chapter; "Inritus". We'll just get more monsters then the final flash file will be released.

ooooo that background looks fantast..i..ictabulous.some.
i'm trying not to be repetitive.

i feel your pain on the font thing, there's not really a colour that can stand out against such a detailed background - what i'd do is make a box behind it, maybe a salmony-orange colour since that isn't on that page already, and lower its opacity so the background is baarely visible but still there. then change the font to white or something. that ought to help. also, are you applying the text directly to the image? or as another layer in flash? i can't tell, but the easier route is definitely the latter.

At 2/17/09 01:04 AM, sucho wrote: ooooo that background looks fantast..i..ictabulous.some.
i'm trying not to be repetitive.

i feel your pain on the font thing, there's not really a colour that can stand out against such a detailed background - what i'd do is make a box behind it, maybe a salmony-orange colour since that isn't on that page already, and lower its opacity so the background is baarely visible but still there. then change the font to white or something. that ought to help. also, are you applying the text directly to the image? or as another layer in flash? i can't tell, but the easier route is definitely the latter.

it is really a pain, i think id go with the box idea if it really isn't readable. by the way the real size of the final flash would be 800x570 and i could read it. but still im unsure. i had black fonts on all the chapters to make it uniform . all the text are on a seperate layer yes. glad you liked it.

Just doing some stuff on mspaint lol

"The eyebearer"

A 2 headed monster with tumors all around its body, he basically lures in dirty places over hospitals.
It basically comes from any tumor that is removed, seems to have a symbiotic relationship with its host as it can see what the host sees with one of its eyes.

Coming in contact with this creature is deadly, eye contact must be avoided at all costs.

A 2 headed monster with tumors all around its body, he basically lures in dirty places over hospitals.
It basically comes from any tumor that is removed, seems to have a symbiotic relationship with its host as it can see what the host sees with one of its eyes.

Coming in contact with this creature is deadly, eye contact must be avoided at all costs.

a bit too small but space is big

Tuk'-Zsar (singula=plural):
these mystic creaturs live in high mountains, were almost nobody comes. the harsh cold doesn't affect them, as they have grown used to it. often mistaken by lost travelers for angels, but they have nothing to do with the Afterlife, but they keep a neutral. they aren't hostile, except when attacked, they are as strong as a strong, healthy man in his prime years, and grow old very slowly. some have been over 300 years old. they don't wear anything except for the armor cladded around their legs. despite their heavy looking leg armor, they weigh suprisingly little, so their wings can hold them in the air. they seem to have mystical 'magic' powers, but i don't know enough to tell you much. they have no gender, it's still a mistery how they reproduce, since there hasn't been any seen sexual activities among them.

awesome

At 2/17/09 03:10 PM, richler wrote: awesome

a new one, dommul of ralt , a demon lord

this is not the finished , so dont consider it

At 2/17/09 05:44 PM, richler wrote: this is not the finished , so dont consider it

looks very promising

ok then here it is... sorry it tok so long...........

At 2/18/09 09:51 AM, lillebille wrote: ok then here it is... sorry it tok so long...........

there is something weird about this picture. it's charming in it's own way. and looks sad too.

Alright, I am kinda busy today, expect another monster from me before the end of the week, but I don't know when.

im working on a thing right now its going to be grea!t (i think)

This isn't as awesome as everyone elses. But if you saw it coming towards you you'd be like "AUGH WTF?"

At 2/18/09 02:30 PM, Sawke wrote: This isn't as awesome as everyone elses. But if you saw it coming towards you you'd be like "AUGH

WTF?"

im scared of black people too.

here it is the mighty monster king ghidiora from the godzilla films is in a little tough conversation.....