thanks a whole lot for the compiled list pawn. It has proved extremely helpful.
I'd like to use pawns list to compile suggestions for each part to polish (including my own)
flashbound18
Tower of Skulls
I am going to try an eliminate the bitmap tracing here.
Las Cannon WTF
the same. I will retouch the rhino to eliminate bitmap tracing.
The Emperor of Mankind wants YOU!
pawn has recorded a better suited voice. I will add the echos and insert
Is that a gazelle?
I'm going to do a things to make this just look better. little fancy things, I mean.
The Terminator
I'm going to improve on the Bgs, and make the one behind john conner darker
ForbidMetal
Defiler Rabit Hunt
the backgrounds coul stand for polishing, and send the sounds via msn so I can remove the fuz (bugs)
Specism
do not make pawns voices permanent (make a copy of the file.) personally, i think that 3/4 of the humor is the funny voice. please post both v's and let us compare them.
BuMbLu
Bunny Squish
the physics just seem a little off on the drop pod part, landing and door, aswell as when he gets run over. I have a suggestion about the blood, but I can't really help save for on msn, so log on this morning!
Make love not warhammer
we're going to have to find a way to compress that video. it alone will drag our preloader
Ouch, my ass!
everything's perfect, but on this version the music is a little too quiet. try to make it even with your sound effects.
Orkish luv...
I love this animation. I only suggest making the background darker, and changing it's outlines from black to dark brown to effectively separate it from the characters
Outkasts
you can achieve more emphasis on the Asian guardsmen by placing the captain guardsmen in the closest seat on his row to the viewer, and losing the glasses on the other guy. also, could you add a shadow under there feet?
I kissed a spawn...
this whole thing is great, but there is this one length where he isn't doing anything, between "too sick to deny it" til before "nuuuu-rgleeeeeee-nuuuuur-gleeeee"
micky315
Armour Saves
please make the background outlines for the wall a Grey slightly darker than the base Grey, and the table outlines a slightly darker red than the table red base.
What's with the helmets?
sorry, but please re-animate the guard aspect with the same neatness and line thickness as the eldar, whom look great. Also, when you animate the walking, could you cause the body to move a little with the legs? they look very static. the black guy at the end shouldn't be say, keep the angry expression, but still make his mouth open. when he walks away, either make him shaking his head or muttering to himself, and make him kick a rock. the subtitles for the eldar aren't very legible. put a black bar behind them and make them white to fix this.
Nuttro
Green Skins...
the only criticism I have for this piece is that the cards aren't obviously card's at first glance. If you make them typical playing cards with a slightly thinner outline, it will be more obvious.
globdecitus
The Pains of War
the physics on the swingin penis are rather off, and it swings for too long. please add explosion sound effects for the background, and use easing on all of the relevant tweens. if you don't know what that is or need help, please msn me: hajimejo@hotmail.com
RedHarvest
Livin' Together
(I saw the completed, this is for that) I loved everything, save for the line where the side table meets the ground, (it's a little chewed up) the space wolfs laugh mouth w/ teeth (the lines are too thick) and bitmap tracing. the voices are excellent, but at parts with the dark eldar, it's hard to tell what he's saying. just add subtitles for this.
Tau Restructuring
(I saw the completed, this is for that) the only things about this movie are the opening fire warriors sleeves, (the shoulder pads should be above them) the mouth that tweens to a ridiculous size during the singing (the lines get too thick) and the bitmap tracing.
please, it's totally acceptable even, to trace you're bitmap traced backgrounds to make not-bitmap traced bs, but please get rid of bitmap tracing! everyone that used it! (myself included)
I think thats all of them....