ya know what, i preety much wrote a script but it sux so anyone else wana write for me?

anyone?

sorry for triple post but common a reallt need a writer!

I'm not sure if i'll try to butt in into this...But heres a space marine <_<
Mainly, I just want to hear opinions, improvements, etc.

@micky315
I would helped you out, haha. if I wouldent be cut up with something right now.

At 3/14/09 12:49 PM, TrojenMonkey wrote: I'm not sure if i'll try to butt in into this...But heres a space marine <_<
Mainly, I just want to hear opinions, improvements, etc.

@micky315
I would helped you out, haha. if I wouldent be cut up with something right now.

HOLY FUCK

you had better be joining sir...

Thanks! o_o
This really is all up to the submitting date ._. , if I got time, than.. sure i'll audition ><

ummm back to my problem plz

trojan monkey:

you have til June coz of these lazy bums (I'm, kidding, Bomblu... please don't hurt me)

Mickey

I will write you a script. what is the general synopsis? the punchline?

At 3/14/09 01:56 PM, flashbound18 wrote: trojan monkey:

you have til June coz of these lazy bums (I'm, kidding, Bomblu... please don't hurt me)

....UNTIL JUNE!?
Holy, dude.
I thought you'll give like, 2-3 weeks <_<
That is WAY more than enough, i'm in! =D

If anyone needs voice editing / acting, add my MSN : barakhn@walla.com (Heres an example.. ~Link~

GENTLEMEN, I GIVE YOU THE MENU.

don't like the music? please, I'm open to suggestion.

At 3/14/09 03:18 PM, flashbound18 wrote: GENTLEMEN, I GIVE YOU THE MENU.

don't like the music? please, I'm open to suggestion.

can you add a clip of my video in the menu when its done??

At 3/14/09 03:23 PM, micky315 wrote:

At 3/14/09 03:18 PM, flashbound18 wrote: GENTLEMEN, I GIVE YOU THE MENU.

don't like the music? please, I'm open to suggestion.

can you add a clip of my video in the menu when its done??

there will be a clip from every part in the background sequence. It currently only has the part's finished, and posted on the thread. I made the screenshots by viewing each flash on spam the web and prt scr 'ing them at the perfect moment

heres an orc

The dimensions of the flash is REALLY small, mate..

That'll be a bitch.
Ni'way.

Cool' menu, heres an idea, do w/e you want with it:
A metal wall bg', with a screen on the right. (With the scenes displayed running), at the middle there will be the Warhammer logo' <_<
On the left there will be the buttons.
</end>

scene select and author sections are already done. the whole menu is completed, I just need suggestions for music. does it work? should it be changed?

I'm also tweaking the KIA section

eldar done

At 3/14/09 04:11 PM, flashbound18 wrote: scene select and author sections are already done. the whole menu is completed, I just need suggestions for music. does it work? should it be changed?

I'm also tweaking the KIA section

Very nice menu :) And thanks to my exams (right) we'll try reach the 24 count till June...i started another part which is about 15secs long...mainly to try out my new tablet :D and it's not space marines...but orks...and transvestite orks...maybe an orgasm somewhere in between ;p

Though, i'd just make one suggestion...i'd change the font if i were you cos in my eyes (ie. it's only an opinion and i might be wrong) it reduced the quality of both the menu and the collab as a whole.
I just quickly made a 2min sketch of a concept logo for the sake of mabye sparking an idea if you decide to change it :)

I'm sorry, but If changing the font is needed, than I'm scrapping the whole thing. the font is the foundation of the menu's theme, and I really don't see what's wrong with it.

I'm sorry If i'm being harsh, but the menu took 8 hours to create, and I had thought the font choices were the best part. now, you are saying that it does the whole collab injustice.

as for the logo, the one you made is nice, but the standing one works better at these dimensions. the logo you made would have to be too large to be read, and it would crowd the menu.

At 3/14/09 04:41 PM, micky315 wrote: eldar done

brilliant, as usual.

At 3/14/09 05:42 PM, flashbound18 wrote: previous ramblings

not to mention that the changing of every instance of the font you think is shitty, would take over half the amount of time it took to put the menu together.

At 3/14/09 05:42 PM, flashbound18 wrote: I'm sorry, but If changing the font is needed, than I'm scrapping the whole thing. the font is the foundation of the menu's theme, and I really don't see what's wrong with it.

I'm sorry If i'm being harsh, but the menu took 8 hours to create, and I had thought the font choices were the best part. now, you are saying that it does the whole collab injustice.

as for the logo, the one you made is nice, but the standing one works better at these dimensions. the logo you made would have to be too large to be read, and it would crowd the menu.

Np man just a suggestion :)
Here's a v.crude wip of my new part:
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/140309/8 2050_sexi.php

Dont kill me man...pls dont....i'm just going to point out a possible mistake in the 'killed in action...the MUNZ one might have to be thEn not thAn...i hope i'm not being picky and wont get myself kicked out off the collab cos of this :'(

can someone please write me a script?

At 3/14/09 08:15 PM, ForbidMetal wrote:

kicked out off the collab cos of this :'(

hahah that is laughable, no chance you'd get kicked out for spotting a possible spelling mistake.

nd Don, don't take things to heart so much, I know your menu means alot to you considering you put so much effort into it and it truly is a really nice menun but he was just making a suggestion, I personally don't see anyhing wrong with the current font BUT don't take what people say when they critisize you out of proportion he never said it was shitty so chill out man.

You have declined his suggestion so that's the end of it. No need for any one gettin upset over it.

peace out ;D

ya ok thats Great but it still doesnt solvemy script problem!! I need a writer, cmon your parts are funny so if you can please come up with something for mine, i have no sence of humer!

This thread advanced 2 pages since I last checked? Also I don't like the pre-loader from the other page.

it may be a while before the internet is back on my computer, but i am done my piece, i just can't post it for a while, sorry

At 3/14/09 09:49 PM, ForbidMetal wrote:

ya ok thats Great but it still doesnt solvemy script problem!! I need a writer, cmon your parts are funny so if you can please come up with something for mine, i have no sence of humer!

Alright, have ' it's a knock life' in the background playing with Dark Eldar singing and dancing it :D

i want an actaull story line

At 3/14/09 05:52 PM, BoMbLu wrote: Dont kill me man...pls dont....i'm just going to point out a possible mistake in the 'killed in action...the MUNZ one might have to be thEn not thAn...i hope i'm not being picky and wont get myself kicked out off the collab cos of this :'(

dude so sorry... I didn't mean to be a nazi! I was really cranky earlier.. sitting in front of a cpu for 8 hours will do that to you.

thank you for pointing out the spelling mistake; please know I'm not the type of leader that kicks someone for something like that!

At 3/14/09 10:18 PM, globdecitus wrote: it may be a while before the internet is back on my computer, but i am done my piece, i just can't post it for a while, sorry

globdecitus! where have you been!

I can't wait.. we got like 1 update from you at least over 5 pages ago!

At 3/14/09 05:47 PM, BoMbLu wrote: Np man just a suggestion :)
Here's a v.crude wip of my new part:
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/140309/8 2050_sexi.php

that's looking really good man... and again, I'm sorry. :(