Well this is interesting. It's not my style as you know. But damn man, your tone is miles better, there is so much good here. I think you are going to go far.

I think it's just too loud overall. The end at 2:30 on is the perfect level and balance. That is where the rest of the track should be volume wise. Because you open so hard you leave nothing to go higher. Drag them drums 10db down, your guitar 8db, then use the headroom for key points. There's a part that sounds like a horn at 0:39 ish but it's lost in the mix due to the high level. 0:48 to 1:05, it's ALMOST perfect that riff is perfect but you're rhythm overpowers it.

Structurally it's really good, there's ebb and flow. There's contrast and all the parts are technically sound. Every aspect of the mix is clear and expressive and the distinctions between your heavy and soft parts create dynamism. I really enjoyed those segments from a personal level.

Redo this track, just roll the levels down and allow it to breathe. Pump the backing, reap the benefits.

Maybe find a slightly more natural kit or reverb them.

It's a 5 all day.

pbj