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That writing block is still creeping. Imagine how many songs I've started, stopped and then deleted if my last upload was in December. This is something I came up with on a whim and kept on writing on a whim. I really want to start doing commissions so hopefully this will be a good kick up the ass. Please leave a rating and a review!

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HekticMusic

2019-09-23 10:59:48

Damn this is heavy af. Great guitars. The problem is that the two guitars compete with each other two much. Try eqing the frequencies of one to leave room for the other. Also the power chords need a little reverb and delay (slight). The drums are great. And the mastering is pretty good.

HighBallers

2019-09-18 00:34:48

badassss shit. nice

hoorayjay responds:

Thank uuuuuu

pitbulljones

2019-08-31 17:35:17

Well then, what do we have here?

An absolutely delicious tune. It's a heavy mix, but its not metal. The phrases are excellent, a lot of talent is in here. Your syncopated rhythm and drum is great.

Subtle glitch nice.

As a track, it is right in my ballpark. I think it needs some gentle work though.

The drums over power the whole mix, it sounds like you used a limiter on the track rather than a multi band compressor. It's the key thing you need to resolve. Multiband comp, soft knee -2db drop.

In turn your guitar on left, is so low in comparison to the rest of the track.

Run a high pass filter on the drums, low pass on the guitars. Pin drum and bass notes middle put the two guitars 33 left 33 right.

tiny bit of verb. Bright eq, multiband compress, excite, mastering plug.

hoorayjay responds:

This has been by the far the most in depth review response I've ever received and is exactly the kind of thing I'm looking for. Thank you!