Can't say I loved it.
This had a pretty nice melody and rhythm, but it felt lacking, perhaps because there was only one instrument being used, and I honestly didn't really love the sound of this instrument either.
It doesn't help that it felt like mostly the same thing throughout the three minutes this piece lasted, with the same basic 8 second melody repeating many times until halfway through (exactly 1:32), and then the new melody continues for the remaining half. Sure, there were a few changes or additions every two times the basic melody was played played, but it didn't prevent the piece from beginning to sound a bit repetitive. Of course, this isn't to say that the few changes which did occur weren't nice. It flowed pretty well, and I especially liked the low bass notes that came in around 0:16 and 1:48.
I didn't really like the ending either (if it can even be called that.) I'm assuming this was intended as three minute loop, but it doesn't even loop very well. There needs to be just a little bit more time after that last note so it still fits the rhythm when the song loops back to the first note.
If this wasn't intended as a loop, then the ending was really not good. There needs to be something after that last note; it just doesn't feel like an ending.
Overall, this isn't bad at all, but it needs much more variety and some work on the ending.
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