The sound that is first introduced sounds nice and could be used in future works, but there is very little variation in the song because the same background is used throughout with not much going on "up front".
Pretty good for a first submission, hope to see more from you.
Well, there really is not supposed to be much variation in this somewhat dark tune. I can think of some other foreboding songs with not a lot of variation, such as "Trail of Blood" from Final Fantasy 7.
At any rate, I do appreciate the review, especially as this is the first song I ever composed. Glad you liked it and thanks for the critique. :)
you know what?
i was like woah how the heck you managed to make a song like this but then i said to myself that you can do anything you just want, keep it up. i like all kinds of ''dark'' feel musik and this is wery good, just like allmost all the other songs you made :D
Yay! I'm glad you really like this track, especially as it is my first original song! :) Thank you very much for the great review! I really appreciate it!
This tune is pretty much dead on with your description. I kinda think of a really hi tech Castlevania type setting. I know a futuristic Castlevania has been done, but not with a really strong technological base, and this song would be perfect for that. The bass and piano to battle a bit, but not enough to weaken the quality of the song.
Cool! I'm planning on doing a few more tracks based on this song, such as an enemy battle theme and victory fanfare, boss battle and a darker theme for being deep in the high-tech ruins. We'll see what happens.
Thank you very much for another great and thorough review! They are always greatly appreciated. :)
i love the eerie fell
i love dark tunes, and you did quite well with this, i enjoyed it alot.
as far as constructive critisism goes, i felt it getting a tiny bit repetitive towards the end there, and the drums would have been perfect with a harder hitting bass...
Ah. A harder-hitting bass drum? I would agree. Granted, I put this song together in one day once I figured out how to better use a MIDI-sequencing program. Nice to know I did a good job overall.
Thank you very much for the honest review and I'm glad you liked my first original track. :)
VERY good for a first attempt. But the really deep bass kinda conflicts with the high piano. But it's very good still! Keep up the good work!
Ah, ha! I welcome your constructive criticism, especially since I'm only starting to get the hang of composing music. Thanks a lot for yet another review! I really appreciate it. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.