Good, but not great!
The lyrical part of the music it's great ... but it would be better to change the vocal technique.
try to sing it with a strong and disturbed voice.
Try not sing like a goat!
keep working on it because This song is really good! just change the vocal technique.
No, i'll kill you.
I think in the verses you should squeeze the lyrics together, too much of a pause, but maybe that's your feel of the song, also I'm really starting to like your guitarist
sorry to hear about your friend and ur wife that sux ass. but it made for one bad ass song. i like alot of your work it seems you dont have a distinctive sound and i like that all the songs are diferent. but this one is by far the best in my opinion.
This sounds like...
Jazz meets Slayer...
Kudos for the analog recording!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.