this song is amazing (and its incomplete!) theres not much i can say that the others below havent already said but its just wow.. i really hope you or someone can help you to finish this song because its too good to leave half finished in a closet like an old project a kid starts with his dad and never finished. props man.
I like the instruments, but i don't like the lyrics
Fair enough. Thanks #653 I really appreciate your input! Oh, and I am guessing that you passed the test??
I think the energy doesn't get out of control and just swallow the song. Sometimes it can mess a whole song up. Nice job!
he is definitely not trying to seduce Mary, listen to the lyrics.
the music is really good, but the lyrics and how they are sung are both quite sketchy and awkward.
"he is definitely not trying to seduce Mary, listen to the lyrics."
You are correct, sir! ;)
"the lyrics and how they are sung are both quite sketchy and awkward."
Yes, I agree. First of all, it is a work in progress and lastly, I can't sing :l
All I've got to ask is, are you trying to seduce Mary, or interrogate her? Because the long breaths are not helping at all for the song. Also: I thought you were going to start singing "enter sandman" :\
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.