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Killer RAT - Cold And Lovely

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One time a friend of mine was talking in detail about necrophilia and it grossed me out and pissed me off. I was having a bad day. This song is my way of saying I'm over it. Please listen to this, ethan butt


Lyrics:


I go to the cemetery at night

Some nice graves are catching my eyes

Dig up a woman, take her for a drive

So cold and lovely, she'll be my bride

I don't care if what I do is not right

I will do as I want and she won't fight

Most people would puke at the sight

Of a girl having sex when she is not alive


DIG HER!

I'm gonna shovel her up!

KIDNAP HER!

I'll make her my wife!

RAPE HER!

I'm gonna fuck her corpse!

FUCK HER!

She doesn't need a life...


What your loved ones find

Will surely make them cry

They don't get what is on my mind

There is no time

To end my crime

Because you have already died


I've got my knife

Into her flesh I dive

You can call me deprived

But I feel so fucking alive!

Her rotting pussy has dried

Use blood as lube, and in I slide

She isn't very warm inside

And she is not really all that tight

I am a nasty guy

Touching and rubbing her decaying thighs

If she was watching from the skies

Tears of rain would fall from her eyes


DIG HER!

I'm gonna shovel her up!

KIDNAP HER!

I'll make her my wife!

RAPE HER!

I'm gonna fuck her corpse!

FUCK HER!

She doesn't need a life...


My bride has died, that’s why she’s my new wife. Her loved ones cried, and were mortified at the sight. She’s dead, to me she has no rights. She can’t fight if she’s not alive. I am not lonely tonight. I don’t care who cries. I see no problems with my crimes. If she watches from the skies, tears will fall from her eyes. She does not have a life.


Fuck


Cops caught me, didn't believe my lies

Everyone knows now that I'm a bad guy

The sheriff asked me, "why?"

To which I had no reply


What your loved ones find

Will surely make them cry

They don't understand what is on my mind

The time has come

They've taken me away

I'm sleeping behind bars tonight.

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I like it, maybe because it sounds like PoP OST :D
Nah, this is just good song :)

guyfromKillerRAT responds:

Except the last chorus. I accidentally mixed my vocals too loud at that part which just sounds awkward.

Heavy stuff. :) I love that intro, love the riffs, appreciate the rhyme structure of the lyrics too, but feel like length-wise structure doesn't always match, some words get stretched out in lack of syllables, rhythmically not always perfect, a little low voice during the bridge/third verse, and voice overall a little strained but...

Overall these are getting pretty good. Dark

-cd-

guyfromKillerRAT responds:

yes I wanted it all to rhyme except for few lines. I didn't practice this song before singing it. Just sang each part in a different take and stitched it all together

Well, the instrumental certainly is catchy. The vocals coming in were perfect complementaing the riff. Necrophillia being the topic certainly was different. My favorite verse was the third one (The "My bride has died..." part. Btw, you said, "Bitch doesn't deserve a life at 2:44 and the description says "she")
The cup hitting a platform during the buildup should gradually get louder-it started to, but got softer, not even before the first verse. Additionally, the pattern of the cups was not steady with the beat, you should let each instrumental get introduced in a fluid pattern to harmonize them. The background vocals had some static in them starting at 02:32 so you may want to watch the volume of that.
Fantastic work.

guyfromKillerRAT responds:

yes thank you for pointing our inconsistencies with the described lyrics. I will fix that. The "cup hitting the platform" is supposed to be the guy walking back to his car, the crash before it was the coffin being tossed into his trunk. His trunk is really big.

The static vocals were purely intentional

Shits deep
6 feet deep

guyfromKillerRAT responds:

She's 6 feet deep under while I'm 6 inches deep inside.

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Votes
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Score
4.53 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 13, 2021
11:05 PM EST
Genre
Heavy Metal
File Info
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4.7 MB
5 min 7 sec

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