I like it, maybe because it sounds like PoP OST :D
Nah, this is just good song :)
One time a friend of mine was talking in detail about necrophilia and it grossed me out and pissed me off. I was having a bad day. This song is my way of saying I'm over it. Please listen to this, ethan butt
Lyrics:
I go to the cemetery at night
Some nice graves are catching my eyes
Dig up a woman, take her for a drive
So cold and lovely, she'll be my bride
I don't care if what I do is not right
I will do as I want and she won't fight
Most people would puke at the sight
Of a girl having sex when she is not alive
DIG HER!
I'm gonna shovel her up!
KIDNAP HER!
I'll make her my wife!
RAPE HER!
I'm gonna fuck her corpse!
FUCK HER!
She doesn't need a life...
What your loved ones find
Will surely make them cry
They don't get what is on my mind
There is no time
To end my crime
Because you have already died
I've got my knife
Into her flesh I dive
You can call me deprived
But I feel so fucking alive!
Her rotting pussy has dried
Use blood as lube, and in I slide
She isn't very warm inside
And she is not really all that tight
I am a nasty guy
Touching and rubbing her decaying thighs
If she was watching from the skies
Tears of rain would fall from her eyes
DIG HER!
I'm gonna shovel her up!
KIDNAP HER!
I'll make her my wife!
RAPE HER!
I'm gonna fuck her corpse!
FUCK HER!
She doesn't need a life...
My bride has died, that’s why she’s my new wife. Her loved ones cried, and were mortified at the sight. She’s dead, to me she has no rights. She can’t fight if she’s not alive. I am not lonely tonight. I don’t care who cries. I see no problems with my crimes. If she watches from the skies, tears will fall from her eyes. She does not have a life.
Fuck
Cops caught me, didn't believe my lies
Everyone knows now that I'm a bad guy
The sheriff asked me, "why?"
To which I had no reply
What your loved ones find
Will surely make them cry
They don't understand what is on my mind
The time has come
They've taken me away
I'm sleeping behind bars tonight.
I like it, maybe because it sounds like PoP OST :D
Nah, this is just good song :)
Except the last chorus. I accidentally mixed my vocals too loud at that part which just sounds awkward.
Heavy stuff. :) I love that intro, love the riffs, appreciate the rhyme structure of the lyrics too, but feel like length-wise structure doesn't always match, some words get stretched out in lack of syllables, rhythmically not always perfect, a little low voice during the bridge/third verse, and voice overall a little strained but...
Overall these are getting pretty good. Dark
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yes I wanted it all to rhyme except for few lines. I didn't practice this song before singing it. Just sang each part in a different take and stitched it all together
Well, the instrumental certainly is catchy. The vocals coming in were perfect complementaing the riff. Necrophillia being the topic certainly was different. My favorite verse was the third one (The "My bride has died..." part. Btw, you said, "Bitch doesn't deserve a life at 2:44 and the description says "she")
The cup hitting a platform during the buildup should gradually get louder-it started to, but got softer, not even before the first verse. Additionally, the pattern of the cups was not steady with the beat, you should let each instrumental get introduced in a fluid pattern to harmonize them. The background vocals had some static in them starting at 02:32 so you may want to watch the volume of that.
Fantastic work.
yes thank you for pointing our inconsistencies with the described lyrics. I will fix that. The "cup hitting the platform" is supposed to be the guy walking back to his car, the crash before it was the coffin being tossed into his trunk. His trunk is really big.
The static vocals were purely intentional
Shits deep
6 feet deep
She's 6 feet deep under while I'm 6 inches deep inside.
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