This is a very interesting 3D flash. The setting was unique itself. I don't understand why someone would complain about the physics or structural design of the facility. It looks very much like a futuristic setting so anything is possible with the physics .Sure its not got a much and it's kind of dull there is always room for improvement. Also, the characters movements were a bit off and looked very weird. Overall, this is a very nice animation and has a lot of potential. Well done. Will hope to see more from your future submissions related to this.
Reviews for "PHASE ONE"
It looks great, I like your cinematography and the subtle camera movements to make us feel sickly and at unease! The animation doesn't have much weight to it he looks like he floats around but it still works so well done. You're great at creation environments, what did you reference for the scenes? Deadspace was one of them I'm guessing?Well done dude! Also the corridor scene with the fans looks awesome I love the lighting in it.
dis es gewd :3
I think it was pretty good but through some of the comments ive seen there are quite a few flaws which i would not of noticed as im not an animator but it kinda reminded me of Dead Space which was pretty cool. Wil be looking around for "phase 2" if it happens and good luck.
Bland....
1 : the character
His/her bones seem to be out of place.
The run animation has way to little weight to it. It makes me think of the doom marine.
Holding a weapon seems to be a weird concept for him/her. Its being held like a dinner plate.
I could only see it was a weapon after the lift closeup.
2 : the level / environment
Were is the bridge suspended on (except for the 6 cables on the beginning)?
The flat graphics is something I don't mind, that was your choice.
Things like the computer screens could have some animation when the person is pressing the buttons.
Overall this makes me thing of mindjack.
There is no weight to anything and it looks so dull.
Try better next time, you'll get it right.