OHH MY GOD! 9 months doing a 3 minutes video? I can´t wait for so long doing a short video, i just wish you could have made it a little longer, if you can do another one, do it!
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Reviews for "PHASE ONE"
Why do you guys discredit this man because he uses 3-D?
All you guys use your mouse, draw somthing crappy, post it, say "Keep it up" and unfairly give it 5 stars. When a guy does 3-D, you go hard on him, dispite stunning graphics, Heavy polygonal detail and count enough to crash my computer, and beutiful amount of shading scripts and particles. And then you give him 2, 1, or Zero, because its "Unfair" of how easy it is to make 3-D art. Well, let me say, FUCK YOU! Do you know how hard it is to make model after model, paricle after particle, frame by frame, polygon after polygon, and have to rig it all? You guys are just getting your fucking mouse, moving somthing here to here, fucking around with a shitty microphone, and get 5 stars. This man may have had a team of 15 to 20 people, or himself, and take about a MONTH or even a YEAR to get it to the point where you can shut up. Yet you don't, and you act like a fanboy because you like one of the either. I just don't know why, because this man has the right to have this just as equally trated as a sexual-lobster or krinkles animation without prejudice. You guys are fucking annoying as hell, and probebly never touched a modeling program EVER. So give this guy the respect he does, and don't complain because of this and that, then point the positive on a flash. This was amazing, and I hope these haters don't let you down. 5 stars belong to you, my friend.
I'm not one of those review freaks. But I'd really like to say sth here. I think you put a lot of effort into this, but as Kieroman mentioned I think you should've worked on the walking-running cycle and on the way he holds his weapon. Also @ 1:24 that column moves a bit weird. Not sure if it was your intention or it just looks weird. But nvm that. And in my opinion everything is a bit too square. You can see that your maps consist of a lot of smaller objects that all put together build the world- I really liked the sounds and the soundtracks. In general I think it's amazing.. you should definitely continue working on this masterpiece :)
You obviously have some serious talent here. I can look at this and just tell that you have some patience. A little more polishing and I'm sure you'll get places, my friend.
Great video, good sound effects and graphics. I like the ambience.
Like some people said, you need to work on the walking and running. I would also add the way he is holding the gun: it should be closer to the body, and more in an angle, and the left arm was to far from the center of the body (the elbow should be closer and then its the forarm that gets away)
And also the gun was to static, it should go up and down as he runs.
I hope you don't take this as a negative review, I'm just trying to give you a few tips.
Great job, keep up.