nice but the runing at the beginng wasnt that good but other than that it was pretty good
Reviews for "PHASE ONE"
I really liked the video, I can see that you put a lot of efford in this. I'm not trying to critic here, but tu help you improve, but I will point some things that I think are not perfect to my humble eye.
- The way the caracter runs: I can see when he is running that the feets are not "sticking" to the floor like they should be. I mean, when you run or walk, you put all your weigth on your feet and they stay there till you lift them. In your animation, the caracter's feet slide fowards before he lift them. You can fix this easily but slowing down it's horizontal move when he runs.
- Cam problem: In the scene where the caracter is going down on the elevator, the camera moves weirdly. I mean, you animate a movement and then another, for example, spining round something and then panning left. What I think you are doing not completly rigth, is the transition between this animations, it's like it stops for a frame and then change into the next animation. The animations are really good, how you move it it's really fluid and goes really well with the scene.
- Model of the caracter: The pants of the caracter looks like he poop on his pants. he has a aweful line there.
Pros:
- You made a really good job with the envorment, with something really simple, you made something really cool! Good Job!
- The music is really nice and goes well with the movie
- I like the way to made every scene, it gives it some mistireous that I like
Good work! Jope to see more of this story comming soon :D
It sucked me right in, if I get to see the next installments I hope you keep the mysteriousness in it. There are some comments about the character movement but I dont think it's that important.
Hope to see more.
I thought the graphics were pretty nice and i love the mysteriousness of the film. A couple of things that kind irk is me one: the way he runs. his back is too straight and he runs really stiffly. Also he lifts his knees up a bit too high and extends the legs too far out when running. seems oddly unrealistic. and second: the way he grips his spas12 when running i guess. it's held at a awkward angle. The hand sporting the gun is way too far out the side. The gun is also parallel to the ground. should be at a more relaxed 45 degree angle and more closer to the chest of the character. other than that, i thought this was great !
keep up the great work my fren
I wouldn't worry yourself with derps like Jack-Mase down there. Who the hell cares what the bridge is suspended from! Amazing job on this one!
My only real critic is the lack of movement of your character, has the same running sway the whole time.