Yeah...look up "Mary Sue" character type.
Reviews for "TOME Episode 03"
im not gonna lie, this was just... awful. clearly you can animate well but... this seems very rushed and uninspired. also this is boring but since i seen the past 2 (really enjoyed them) this was a huge letdown. there were jokes but they were not funny in anyway.
im sorry to say but this cannot deserve 5/5 stars. the people who did rate this 5/5 obviously didnt even watch the whole thing or they just did that because you are kirbopher
Jesus, this one was as boring as the last ones.
Yet there are improvements, specially on the characters models, still generic as fuck, but at least more appealing. Animation seems to be more fluid, more appealing, but not enough to actually be considered good.
The rest? The dialog has improved, but it still drags for too long; the story itself is as cliche as always, hell, it seems to getting worse with the use of anime references (that finger bullshit on that new female character, and the way you try to make the other one as a "OMG so Kawaiii!!11" type); speaking of characters, they are all still cardboard cutouts, except maybe the demon guy (even though the whole "I need money for school" was extremely retarded) and Nylok (which is still not funny, but did made me smile in a few parts this time) and for me, the final nail on this episode was that whole "stopped by a hug" cliche (so many animes have use that it should be banned) and that god-awful credits song.
Oh yeah, the thing that still confuses me is the whole game aspect of this "show", I mean, most of the time it doesn't make sense. I believe you should just scrap that idea and focus on a real fantasy world plot.
In conclusion: mayor improvements on the animation, and minor in the dialog, but the story and characters are still generic anime rip-offs, which is why this ship is still sinking.
This is so goddamn animu, it hurts.
The animation was decent, but dude. Really? The Butch girl and whimsical contrasting minor characters? The mild mannered protagonist? The villain with a sexual identity crisis? The best friend who acts like he's amazing but in reality is a screw up? Give your characters a bit of personality rather than some recycled hog-wash.
ok i'm pretty sure raven freak is a girl in the origanal and now he is a little gay sick bastard so yeah blackdragon is out peace