very fun and nice story!
wanted a traditional story like this. a few grammar/sentence/spelling errors and the movement of the panel/script/pictures are too slow. when i hit space when i had the option the character wouldn't block. i found that i had to block a second or half second later so it was merely a timing issue. but the game itself is very pleasing and im looking forward to chapter 2. the art/graphics look decent but I'm waiting for something even better and I'm very excited to see some improvements. Keep up the good work!
and treb1998, your game isn't loading because your flash player isn't updated.