Reviews for 4 IN 1: Story Generator

[Zangara]

Look like a real story

Lol, look like a real one : I put it with my comments :

Zangara found themselves on the floor outside of Zangara's Castle feeling very dizzy and sick but not knowing why. Zangara decided to go back inside but was turned away by the smart bouncer at the door. (Yeah, it's my castle, so I hope I got a smart one !) Zangara wanted to get to the bottom of what had happend and asked 'What should I do ?' to which the bouncer, Marcus replied 'Got to synthonize bro' (I don't know what's english for what Neo do in Matrix, I put "synthonize" as a verb) with a look of creepy (Ok, no i'm really afraid)

By this point, Zangara had given up trying to get back inside and decided to walk home (that was already my home but anyway !) but tripped on a lovely strange globe which was just lying in the middle of the road. Zangara who wasn't feeling too smart decided to rub the object (nice one !) which teleported them to Zangara's Castle, which was filled with many people, all looking very easy, Zangara wanted to talk to them but soon passed out and found themseleves waking up in Bayona (a city in France where I go on holyday.. lol) what had happend? Zangara didn't want to think about it anymore and decided to forget by walking (that really should make me forget about this. Really ? Oh ok, I should walk more... xD)

End?

9/10 :
-more drawing/graphics to illustrate the story should be appreciated
-more stories !

Little-Rena responds:

Yeah, I can't draw though so I need to get someone to draw them and more stories? Yeah, probably a good idea, lol.

Thanks.

[marioliveson]

Weird, yet fitting.

Charlie Sheen found themselves on the floor outside of Farmville feeling very dizzy and sick but not knowing why. Charlie Sheen decided to go back inside but was turned away by the manly bouncer at the door. Charlie Sheen wanted to get to the bottom of what had happend and asked 'Where are you?' to which the bouncer, Osama bin Laden replied 'Up your ass.' with a look of grubby.

By this point, Charlie Sheen had given up trying to get back inside and decided to walk home but tripped on a dead carrot which was just lying in the middle of the road. Charlie Sheen who wasn't feeling too smart decided to jump the object which teleported them to Farmville, which was filled with many people, all looking very alive, Charlie Sheen wanted to talk to them but soon passed out and found themseleves waking up in Pickle, what had happend? Charlie Sheen didn't want to think about it anymore and decided to forget by winning.

End?

Little-Rena responds:

lol, well I am glad you liked it.

[EnactJudo]

The greatest story ever told

Hitler found themselves on the floor outside of Faggotsville feeling very dizzy and sick but not knowing why. Hitler decided to go back inside but was turned away by the Poopy bouncer at the door. Hitler wanted to get to the bottom of what had happend and asked 'Why are you a faggot?' to which the bouncer, Buttfuck McThompson replied 'N****rJews' with a look of Flaming.

By this point, Hitler had given up trying to get back inside and decided to walk home but tripped on a Faggoty Butt which was just lying in the middle of the road. Hitler who wasn't feeling too smart decided to Fart the object which teleported them to Faggotsville, which was filled with many people, all looking very Jew, Hitler wanted to talk to them but soon passed out and found themseleves waking up in Anus, what had happend? Hitler didn't want to think about it anymore and decided to forget by Pooping.

End?

Little-Rena responds:

Oh my

[onon7]

lol

onon had just finished his semester at The ulaanbatar University. onon was ready for the winter and had plans to fly to my bacement and stay for 666 weeks to dance. Sadly onon was tricked and ended up in my attic where the evil dog had been trying to take over the villages of the happy cat. onon met bob and they dance together.

They were very handsome when they found the skinny penis that would destroy the dog once and for all. When they won the couple celebrated with KFC until 999999. When suddenly a funny earthquake started to destroy my attic so the planes engines were loling and they were off to a sexy vacation in my bacement.

Little-Rena responds:

lol

[Neophyte-Ronin]

Excellent for a Couple Cheap Laughs

Since it is a text generator, I decided to give it a whirl. People are posting their unique creations, so I'll submit one of my own. This is my first attempt with the "Lonely Hearts" device by "seruphim":

"Hey all of you vivacious, females I'm a male looking for a shrewd night out with you! I love to desire and I play the martial arts (aikido). I hope you're a cunning person cause we would be Cosplaying alll night long. We would do it like the Black Mage and Agent Reno after a night of Virgin Pina Colatas. If you're not excessive and ready to hike then don't bother."

Okay, so I was hoping that the generator distributed the adjectives and such in a logical fashion, but it's a bit of guesswork on part of the user about where things go. To summarize, I didn't like how this one turned out. I had no clue it would talk about doing it like one celebrity and another celebrity. I just put a couple infamous characters from Final Fantasy VII and 8-Bit Theater and got an image in my head that refuses to go away. And I understand Reno does not imbibe VIRGIN pina colatas... or anything frilly for that matter. And the Black Mage has it for redheads but not THAT kind of redhead! Anyway, I never wrote out a singles' personal ad before, and now that this device helped me out, I got shivers down my greasy spine.

Like most generators, you don't get to preview what paragraph you're filling the blanks to, so the first few tries are going to end in misery. With that said, playing a little will help smooth everything out. And it's always fun to get surprised.

Why this thing hasn't gotten Front Page or better awards... or a better score in general... I will never know. But I do know that the "4 in 1: Story Generator" is an excellent GADGET (put it in the proper category, not Puzzles/Other) with a level of functionality on par with the plot generator that Tom Fulp designed for one of the competitions a few months back. And it gets just as many laughs with each use.

Little-Rena responds:

I did put it in the gadget category but some how it seemed to have gotten changed, I have fixed that now anyway, thanks.

The reason there is no preview is for the purpose of the supprise, there should maybe be a generate again button or more descriptive input names but usually they are in order of how they appear.