It's missing something...
Te animation's fluid enough (though a few hitches) and it was quite well drawn, the music suited it but I felt it was missing...something...Hard to discribe really...well, I was expecting a more climatic ending then a bloodsplattered face and then a beheading for example...The idea was there but it seems to lack some emotion and energy...
mkay
it was ok. put more effort in the frame by frame animation, not just use tweens because you can. the shots where good. the music was ok.
good and bad
cinematography A+
coreography D+
It needs improvement
But I think you'll get it right the next time.
Well...
While it looks nice, and does indeed convey a story, it still feels empty. I'm banking on this being a result of there not being anything going on really. We have a few seconds of mourning, some dramatic camera play of two or three scenes drug out quite far, then a bit of fighting. The problem with the fighting is, there really isn't much. He chops up one, stands in the middle of em, THEN SUDDENLY BOOM! Now it's him and the "boss" fighting. About 10 seconds of two fight scenes, then an epic finish combined with a flashback of the prior episode.
Spice it up a little! A few more scenes instead of the same few loops n' played out pictures woulda made this far better. As is, it looks and plays out more like a comic book action scene that an actual fight.