it was ok
it was ok
Reviews for "The Last Fight: Final Ep"
not bad
not a bad video,i like the theme and the style
Good one
The animation is great. I think you did a great work. The only thing, that I didn't like very well is timing at some scenes. But you already know that :)
Not bad.
I have to agree with some of the others, that something is missing. I by no means underestimate the difficulty of frame by frame animation, but what you have here seems like its missing a few high quality shots. Almost all action is implied. This works as long as you make up for it with demonstrated action here and there (see any reasonably budgeted anime)
I also feel that several shots hold for far too long, such as the explosion. Long hold shots are very hard to get right (I don't think I've ever nailed it). Too short, and it feels strange, too long and its distracting and irritating.
In the future, I hope you spend a little more time on a few high content scenes, instead of several comic book style action shots with minimized movement. I applaud your music choice though, and your style is on point.
music,setting and style
those are the pros.
my problem with it is: The "action" part doesnt deserve its name. The movements are just too bad. Sry, but for instance the first three or four strikes with his saber look more like hes holding a brush and paints a canvas. Overall i got the impression, you should have maybe done it like a slide show? You know, single pictures with less animated parts.. more like a manga slide show (i think of manga firstly because of your style of course but also because i think those genre shows how to create simple, strong and expressive(dunno if that works in english)pictures.
Just wrote so much, because i thought you might have been a little overfed with "wows" on this one.
But anyway, I could never do such thing!
So thank you for the entertainment and
peace