Requires polish
My gripe is mainly in the lack of consistence between the scenes. His sword appears on his right hip, but in the next scene he draws from the left. He does a thrusting motion with the sword for the finishing exchange, but in the next scene he does a horizontal cut. Blood drawn on one side of the face appears on the other and such.
These are little things, but they add up and diminish their impact since they are inconsistent. Keep your eyes on the whole and not just the scene-by-scene choreography, as the rest is well delivered