This is very good...
... but it'll prolly get held down at a rating of "3" due to myriad nincompoops...
Reviews for "Flight of the Dragonfly"
I have a few questions
First: why the second girl didn't stop the first one?
Second: is the second girl realy a girl? she looks more like a boy
Third: If she realy is a girl, then were they lesbians? lol :P
Bailifagus responds:
Wow lol you guys really want your closure don't you...
Its an artistic piece, it's supposed to be interpreted, not.. forced upon you.
Part of the reason i created it like this, was to get people think for themselves about it.
Maybe they could apply themself to the situation, and feel the same emotions these two might have.
Or somehow even relate the situation to their own, in their own lives.
This wasnt supposed to grasp every person. It was made for those who could relate to it on an emotional level.
>__<
touching.
I can't say this was a bad video, but it was that good either. I guess I don't embrace my emotions enough to actually feel anything.
anime drawing style is incredibly overused
find a more personalized style, waaaay too many people have drawn anime the same exact way (manga, whatever you cann it), so it's just bland.
as for the animation itself, it was ok, but it didn't flow naturally and it was mostly tweened and pictures with twitch animations.
music matched well, kudos for that,
plot was a little random, and the girl had no reason to jump off the cliff right in front of her friend, even if it was metaphorical, there needs to be a little more storywriting to give exigence to the plot.
without music, this would not have fared so well, but because the music tied in so well, i guess it deerved front page for the good timing.
just please PLEASE PLEEAASSSEE.. try using your OWN style and not the same ol' same ol' manga blandness.
Cliché! but good nonetheless
cliché emotions, cliché story and cliché manga/anime drawing style.
However, you show talent in both drawing and using the program. you also do explain in the comment section that this cartoon isn't forced on anyone, and that's true. this is me trying not to be an asshole...