Nice
THe music suited it really well and the animation captured the mood great work, i haven't seen something that emotive before nice job :)
Nice
THe music suited it really well and the animation captured the mood great work, i haven't seen something that emotive before nice job :)
I liked it.
Not to mean, but it is kinda random without a story line on how and why she did it. But it was temendusly good, love the animation, good music to it, and i think some times, when people make these kinda of sad storys, they are realated to the artists life, on what heppend to them, or in their mind.
Above all, it was great.
very nice
The whole suicide theme's been overdone, but what hasn't been nowadays. It was straightforward. Not very emotional for me, but definitely should be for those who've personally dealt with suicide.
My only criticism is that it could have had more to it. It was a successful shorter flash. Very well animated, and so I ask, why not have added some back-story? Reason for suicide, why they're friends. Not to the point that it gets to drawn out or boring, just enough to boost the viewer's interest in the characters.
Overall, nicely done in regards to what you were going for. And for adding to it, why not make the characters feel a bit more real? It would make them more interesting and you clearly have the skill to do it :)
(ps. I don't know about the dragonfly at the end.. sweet but somewhat cliche)
uhh
its touching but i dont think theres a big sense in this... why the fuck did this thing fly in the end... because "she keeps living... because her feelings fly away... because there are times in life where you just have to let it go...?"
if that was the real interpretation the way you tried to make it look like its kinda lame. there should be more behind this and the only real thing touching is the piano. i dont really like that boring idea
nicee
liked the concept , but you should tell what lead to her suicide.. it would make it a little less confusing. other than that, the animation was really good (enjoy the black and white) and the music was great
final score: 8/10