English class, please.
LOL on that VO. It sounds like Butthead (Beavis and Butthead) if Butthead made up a bunch of pseudo-intellectual nonsense. My advice would be not to try so hard with the writing, which is wordy and confuses both the story and the mission.
For example, here is how I would have written your 3rd mission brief (I'm omitting things that are irrelevant to the mission brief). Please note that it's difficult to understand and I'm translating what I THINK you're trying to say. Also, I hate writing in passive voice (putting "have" in front of every verb) but I think it's used so much in video games that I guess it's now widely accepted.
MISSION BRIEF:
The enemy's forces have grown stronger. In response, you have been given more effective weapons from the village armory. Your mission is to capture five enemy hunters for questioning. Perhaps they could know the whereabouts of the injured tribal leader and the man who replaced him.
Meanwhile, your daughter makes a steady recovery and shows an interest in combat...
OBJECTIVE:
Shoot people.
BAM. Simple. I didn't even have to read it again! Amazing!
Gameplay is ok. I'm mainly just in awe of the thinly veiled poor writing. Usually it's just plain old bad, but you actually give bad some style!
For that I award you a 5.