Awesome.
I KNEW he was going to take the paycheck in the end XD
Reviews for "The Paper Prince"
ernest-aka-gooey responds:
Aha good. I felt it would only be natural.. I Mean he's not going to forget his money that he won workin' in that place
Origami Solutions
Nice tale ,characters, and animation. Just a thought though: possibly add the main character (after quitting his job) making origami happily ($ and peaceful music too?). Hey, and maybe the old fella is his real dad. Just a thought. Good work man!
ernest-aka-gooey responds:
Hmm... now before posting it here I hadn't even considered having anything conclusive like that... but it seems like a fair amount of people want to have SOME kind of closure.
Maybe if I can think of something satisfying I'll put in a very short Epilogue type deal
Funny!
It was so funny when he sent his story to all of his work mates xD
I really enjoyed this.
And ignore the 0 below me, he just cant appreciate proper flash animations.
ernest-aka-gooey responds:
Aha good. Originally that scene was quite a bit longer that involved more computer problems and frustration but I cut it out due to taking up too much time.
Awesome when my jokes are found funneh.
It was nice
But for my attention span it was too long. Animations could use work, looks too much like it was drawn by pencil (even for animators who use old fashion pencil and the like). Sounds were kind of funny in a good way. So for my suggestions, don't drag it on for so long and just work on your animations for it, then you'll be set in my opinion.
Here's a suggestion.
Excellent story and characterization, all that I can suggest is that you clean up the animation, and maybe add some music behind it since there isn't any real voice acting going on. That will make it feel more full and dynamic.