Interesting concept.
Ah, I haven't written a review for quite a while. This was the pea in the rice, one that stands. Although the art was well, it was more rushed looking, however the story concept was nice. A business man looking to make a future of origami art finds out that he can't abandon his job, however the end leaves the imagination to think it out.
Ah so you like the ending?
I think I am going to add a little epilogue onto it just 'cause the most common suggestion I get is to make a sequel or just change the ending or SOMETHING.
Glad the review you decided to write was for mine!
Beautiful,
in a funny way.
Very satisfying review.. glad you liked it
Well done
I like that the story is driven without any dialogue and constant humor. The only parts taht annoyed me were the audio. The "voices" were a lot like the sims and sounded almost too comedic, even though it was supposed to be a comedy. The laughter was too soon and didn't sound like it would in an office, more like you got it out of some audio samples.
Ahh ya the laughing... really I just got what I could find from the internet. I couldn't think of another way to get a decent recording of a bunch of people laughing.
As to the voices.. well idunno. It was just my instinct to go with voices like that.
Glad you liked it though
It's really good!
I like his expretions makes me smile :P
Tho i feel like it's only the beginging of a much longer story....
nice work :P
not bad
those people in the office can read quickly tho
other than that pretty good