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Reviews for "[fishes]"

good

I liked it, a few things bothered me but overall i liked the film. I wish you couldn't see the boxes around your objects, if that's unavoidable then ignore this i guess. The animation also seemed to have a lot of noticeable loops, that kind of distracted me from the whole experience. Aside from that the animation was great. However, I wish you'd worked more on font placement, it was creative and bold to do something besides just centering your text but I wish you'd tried to do something with font size...sorry, i took a semester of graphic design so i judge that stuff a little too harshly i guess.

one more thing, the writing. I understood the things you were saying in the piece, but i feel like they should have been said differently. you need to put more thought into the words, since they're on screen they are what people will be paying close attention to, make sure what you write makes complete sense even without pictures.

anyways, all that stuff is what i'd do differently, it's your work and for every complaint I had, I still thought the work was good. Mostly I'm impressed with the style of it, it looks like a few artists notebooks crammed together, dunked underwater and set to motion, and that's great.

notorious responds:

the writing actually makes more sense if you just read it without the pictures, as for the boxes: i know the problems your having. it's not the animation, but something's weird on your computer i think. Thanks for the review!

Not bad

I sat through it all, just to say i'd watched it. But honestly its not really my thing.

Still, i'm sure many people will enjoy it :)

My only real critism is you could do with a theosourus, you use the same words (insignificant for example) so many times they loos their effect.

Meh..

You must have a sad life, thinking you don't pick options, but options pick you. I didn't like that message at all, and it'll only depress people.
As far as the art, not my style, so I'll say i didn't like it, but that's just because i don't like this style in general.
The sound...i don't know if it's just my headphones, but sometimes it was so crackly and sounded so bad, i took them off. gotta work on that.

notorious responds:

ok

keep in mind sometimes things aren't all happy and there are depressing moments so it's not like you can completely avoid them

and no i have a great life considering some of the people i know i actually consider myself quite well off!

Mmmmm....

Neat frame by frame

i mean

it was okay. it got repetitive and the whole poetry thing got to be a little pretentious. I loved the animation part, that whole part with the blurry bubbles over video footage. If it was all more like that I would have given this a 9 or 10. i understand you weren't going for what i'm asking for, i'm just saying i felt the strong points of it were in those animation bits, not in the poetry/writing