Wow. Very intersting.
I have to say that I truly enjoyed your flash. It is good to see something else than the violence and sadistic humor(which I love) all the time. I gave youa 9 simply because there were a few places where it was hard to read the text, but other than that, I think that this was a masterfully well=done flash.
As for your argument against free will, I have been having the same argument with my friends as of late. Two of them believe there is no such thing as free will, because of all the laws of biological processes. I understand their argument, but refute it all the same. The only thing that made me watch your flash was an interest in the experimental and artistically done flash cartoons.
At any rate., keep it up. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thank you for opening doors with your wonderfully done flash.