interesting, but
you're critiquing the structure of the world without offering any possible solution. anyone can make a piece about how life is sometimes monotonous and repetitive. everybody feels that way about their lives at one point or another. granted, the way you presented this idea was quite intriguing, except for at the end when you simply said: "we are all fishes." tagging that ending on was absolutely unnecessary and made the rest of the piece seem boring and unoriginal, though in reality it wasn't. still, i ask you, what do you propose humans do to be rid of this monotony? and if you don't have a solution, then honestly you have no right to create something like this. that's like making a flash about how people have to eat every day. it just doesn't make any sense in the long run.
overall i enjoyed it however. the mixed media aspects were very well done.