Reviews for [fishes]

[chrisyrulz]

not quite...

hmmm....

i honestly had the most open mind you could get before i reviewed this and i was expecting some poor reviews as you told people to keep an open mind...when i saw the 10's and your average of 9.5 i guess i expected it to be much more than what it was...

the animation is ...ok you could have done it without tracing
the music was increasingly annoying
the poem was incredible

i wish i could feel the need to give you a full ten but to many important factors where missing , but there is no doubt in my mind that you will be able to acheive this next animation :D

notorious responds:

ok!

[retrocareer]

interesting, but

you're critiquing the structure of the world without offering any possible solution. anyone can make a piece about how life is sometimes monotonous and repetitive. everybody feels that way about their lives at one point or another. granted, the way you presented this idea was quite intriguing, except for at the end when you simply said: "we are all fishes." tagging that ending on was absolutely unnecessary and made the rest of the piece seem boring and unoriginal, though in reality it wasn't. still, i ask you, what do you propose humans do to be rid of this monotony? and if you don't have a solution, then honestly you have no right to create something like this. that's like making a flash about how people have to eat every day. it just doesn't make any sense in the long run.

overall i enjoyed it however. the mixed media aspects were very well done.

[Lusky36O]

Alright

Animation was meh, and the video bored me at points. I kind of enjoyed the poetry from what I understood. Overall, it was an ok flash with a interesting message.

[LiquidSnake-No-1]

not bad not bad.

It was okay, some of the wording could have been refined to have more feeling/depth in my opinion and you failed to kind of, "create a tie" with the viewer if u ask me. other than that it was good, the text at times seemed a bit fast, i am aware that it wasn't too fast to be read but it was too fast to be read if you wanted to fully capture the animation/still/video that was in its background.

oh and somebody said they were wondering why it was called "fishes" then they figured it out in the end! good on you i kind of agree but uhh.. i still dont get why its called Fishes and not Fish. >_< yar, the plural of fish is fish xD

anyways, good stuff lad

[ry-man283]

mm...

i like the artistic factor but it got boring