Weelllll......
Graphics were fine, sound was fine, animation lots of looping but not bad, the one walk cycle with the soldiers was ify he didn't quite seem to have the weight there.
I don't get the distinct impression these soldiers are bad guys, you mention them coming in thousands like a pack of wolves hunting sheep but thats it you shift focus more on the plague...just I feel there should be more dealing with the soldiers to justify their existance or take them out and focus on the plague. This plague is what I feel from watching it, and reading reviews, is where your main story/message is coming from. Just you have two antagonists it seems but neither really develope enough to see why our hero, if you will, decides he will kill himself rather then fight. And for being a short film you need to really develope one within those 2 minutes, and I think you can really get that by tweaking this just a little
Other then that it was good, dispite the idea has been used before, the music and all reminded me of a final fantasy begining.