WOW
very good
im not a fan of these kinds of storys
but it was good
Reviews for "Oxygen"
notorious responds:
thank ya
Neat, but....
Overall good work, I like your style. Only one problem. You really need a good editor. Everything was spelled correctly but over and over again you had words reversed because it sounded artistic, not because it actually added anything to your work. For instance, "I ceased my existence." Not a good sentence, unimpressive. Other than that though, I dig it.
notorious responds:
I CEASE my existence. Your review needs an editor. Lmao.
Thanks for the good and helpful review!
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It was very good, but you should have added a little more to it.
cool
liked that a lot bit of a crossover from HLF2 and killzone story wise - if i got the story right u want to tell. Looking at this i assume youve seen Jin-Roh: The Wolf Brigade before if you havent you should defenitly have a look at it think you might enjoy it
A true Masterpeice!
Art 8/10
Sound 8/10
Story 8.5/10
Originality 9.5/10
I really, really enjoyed it. Awsome job!