WOW
very good
im not a fan of these kinds of storys
but it was good
Reviews for "Oxygen"
notorious responds:
thank ya
Neat, but....
Overall good work, I like your style. Only one problem. You really need a good editor. Everything was spelled correctly but over and over again you had words reversed because it sounded artistic, not because it actually added anything to your work. For instance, "I ceased my existence." Not a good sentence, unimpressive. Other than that though, I dig it.
notorious responds:
I CEASE my existence. Your review needs an editor. Lmao.
Thanks for the good and helpful review!
Wow
Just beautifully made. :)
notorious responds:
thank ya ;)
hmmmm
i dont quite understand it really. but good. please answer
notorious responds:
vffg
A true Masterpeice!
Art 8/10
Sound 8/10
Story 8.5/10
Originality 9.5/10
I really, really enjoyed it. Awsome job!