could really use some better grapics
yeah, it actually does need some work on grapics... you need to work on the art, shapes and sketches... and it wud be better if it was darker... i mean, the yellowis sky really didnt feel right... the sound was dragging, but it served its purpose... if you could, it would help if you'd find someting better... the poem was good... nice concept... but i didnt like te way you merged the "real" images wit te animated ones... it made the animation look... uh... worse, im sorry... but i loved the way you shifted scene to scene... the concept there, too, was good, but the presentation didnt give it justice... please, revise it... i really like te concept...