Dude, you need to work more time on drawings
Animations are good , but the corpses of everyone are really without propotions .
Im talking to artist to artist, and i think you can do better .
First off all look some human propotions in general , ol look some animes' ^_^ .
Also , for blood effects dont use gradients , because they look bad.
Afterall , good work .
Wasn't that bad
Sometimes teh characters look'd a bit akward, but the animation was really smooth and the fighting was pretty cool.
I jus didn't much like the dialouge nor the fact that she got the shit beat out of her and shes perfectly fine....
Overall, i liked this and look forward to the actually series
lacking
Your character seems to have a deep conflict between actual stupidity and feigned stupidity. Animation was decent but the music was louder than your characters speech. Also, the sword was very cliche. Work on it, you'll get better.
The art wasn't bad.
So why is it that she got her face
beat on, with noticeable blood,
yet in the next scene her skin doesn't
even have a blemish?
The sounds can use a touch up.
other than that,
just another one of "those" flashes...nothing new.
Keep practicing.
something is wrong with u guys
what is wrong with i dont care if its a setup but senselessly beating up a girl that viciously is wrong